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Have You Ever…*remix*(feat. Yaz)
Have You Ever…*Remix*
Relpies to… Masta C (feat. Ken Dawg)-The Riff Raff formula-Full Circle * Deep Piece * Masta C (feat. Gene Pool)-Lies yo have u ever had that feelin... where u just cant explain wat happens.. this explains those moments.... [Chorus] Have u ever had that felling in ya throat when ur about to choke// Have you ever had that felling like ur lifes is 1 bigg joke// Have you ever had a day when u think u got a shit life// Have you ever had that feeling when ur going through strife// [Verse 1]-UsKi Have u ever had that feeling when ur gonna give up// well ima make u have that feelin so u will live up// I will show u tha way but u gotta go for It// And don’t let ne 1 take over ur life and any ov ya shit// Have you ever had ya best frends asken ya for a fight??// Well I have but it isnt because ima white// Its because he neva had that feeling ov death// And I will start to kill for tha thrill and let em beathe his very last breath// Have u Ever felt tha shit i've been through// you will only kno if it happens t you// man i bet half of ya have a good education// well my education has limitations// I bet u have neva had this happen...to you live in tha clare// have you ever had that feeling that u cant show fear// and you will neva drop a tear// [Chorus] Have u ever had that felling in ya throat when ur about to choke// Have you ever had that felling like ur lifes is 1 bigg joke// Have you ever had a day when u think u got a shit life// Have you ever had that feeling when ur going through strife// <~(Yaz)~>(\1/)<~(Forsaken)~> have you ever had your life, fucked-over, and flipped *upside-down*// it makes you feel like your fallin, and you'll never *hit-the-ground*// shit backs up and rewinds, like your odds *just-stacked*// cuz people don't evan know you, but they talkin to *much-smack*// this is the reign of fire, were all *hell-is-unleashed*// you shoulda kept-it to-yourself, now your *facin-a-beast*// the livin forsaken one sent from the prince *of-the-dark*// the angle with the scabbed wings, came back to *leave-my-mark*// cuttin through souls-and-rymes, like realy *is-that-so-bad*// I'm just takein the shit, that you *clearly-never-had*// [Chorus]x 2 Have u ever had that felling in ya throat when ur about to choke// Have you ever had that felling like ur lifes is 1 bigg joke// Have you ever had a day when u think u got a shit life// Have you ever had that feeling when ur going through strife// yo i hope u understand this shit we hav written ...... man u betta understand that others have had that same feeling....... your not tha only 1 we all have in different ways........ |
looking for feed back on this
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haha koo uski... ya yall send some feedback and shit... i did parts on this verse to so yall know were im commin from
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com on we want som feed back on this aiight People Peace (v)
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any 1 gonna drop some feed back????
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i want som fuken feed back already
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nice piece............
nice verses by both of u, i thought that yaz's verse was alittle better... the chorus is iight.. i think its needs some work but over all - pretty good piece............ return the favor and check out my open mic piece http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92075 thanks |
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