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Dominator -vs- X Ecution
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He Spits First No crew No hate No d.r |
iight this is ma check in both verses due b4 12noon....iight.......
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No... you spit first...... im at college doing hw....... those were the rules... ill spit after..... dont accept a challenge unless you agree
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okie dokie smokey.......................ill drop shortly............
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When I spit, you be getting pains and Imma about to end ur reign
If knowledge is power, Then U must love givin brains Why u even gonna post a verse, cuz what I keyed’s tighter Shit…I’m rippin his vocals out like Sigfried’s tiger I draw my sword. Now you can find this bitch In morgues Like art forums, this faggot is back to the drawin board I’m about to take ya life…In fact, make it twice Cuz If it's time to chill, I’m about to break the ice He’s a blatant geek. I’ll never let him take the green If he was a phone operator he couldn’t make ends meet |
Your X Ecution has begun, and after a few of my punches theyll have to wire your jaw
My spits rip hard like im tearin out your vocal cords leavin ya beggin to withdraw You remind me of a Jehovah's Witness, your gettin rejected door to door Peeps wishin they could splatter yo brains on the floor, just can't stand you anymore 15 years old and 2500 posts, even ya mom knows your a waste of space Spendin all your time here, but still got less flow than a car with to much bass Stop actin all tough just cuz your avvy is a picture os a grenade Because your scheme are simple and your punches are played Silly faggot quit posin, we knows theres no X Ecutions to A-Wait in 7-1-8 Just go buy a donut, it'll equal ya votes - ya not gettin any like fat guys on blind dates |
I Gotta Give This To Dominator. Both Verses Were Lackin'. I was Expectin' More From 2 Niggaz Wit Ova 600 Posts. Dominator's Verse Had Harder Punches. Simple As That.
Vote = Dominator |
word....i thought X would come better...Sigfried line was tight....but Dominator got this because of better punches and personals...the 718 line pretty much took it....anyway...here's a breakdown for u two...
BREAKDOWN Vocab - Dom Multis - Dom Personals - Dom RhymeScheme - Dom Structure - X Flow - Tie Creativity - Dom Complexity - Dom Metas - Tie (both had played concepts) Wordplay - Tie (same as above) Dominator - 6 out of 10 X-Ecution - 1 out of 10 Tie - 3 out of 10 Overall - Dom took this mostly because of better personals...u both had kinda old wordplay.....but i think he got it because of that....nice read from u both....no hate...just a vote.... peace 4:20 |
Breakdown:
Punches Dom Multies Tie mettas Dom Wordplay Dom Personals Dom Vote Dom.... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90949 I took the time now hit me up.... |
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at 1st i wusent feelin' dominators verse, but it got better tha last 2 lines killed it 4$h0. tha other guy came hard also but id expect sumthn better wit a record like that.
flow-x punchs-dom personals-dom closer-dom (hot) vocab-dom Hit this bttle up: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...8908#post898908 |
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Yo on the real.........Dom had better wordplay and he came a lot harder.......X didn't do too bad just gotta up the rhyme style and use better language.............................Dom
I think u Didn't poll on yer last vote...................... |
Flow: Tie
Punchs: Dom Metas: Dom Multis: Dom Enjoyment: Dom Structure: X Vote: Dom I wudda excpeted X to come much much harder witta record like tht mayb hes havin a bad day...dom takes this shit http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90832 hit that shit up...or imma bug you like my illness..lol j/p |
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