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Dominator -v.s.- Born To Kill
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You ain't dominating shit, submissive bitch, ya can't fight...
Lyrical Soldier, but here's a switch, he's the one on the right. (his sig pic) Scared in battle, so he fucked up twice makin this thread... He thinks he's armed with wits but it seems he's been misled. Ya gettin captured and fucked, soldier, call you Jessica Lynch... I'd show ya my dick but ya used to em and wouldn't even flinch. Cuz ya gay in a way that leaves straight dudes dismayed... Lookin ta find true love, so you can one day throw the bouquet. Ya 'fight a war against all', yes...that many people hate you... Cuz ya rhymes suck and wouldn't catch on even if ya spat crazy glue. |
Explanation- He's a 34 year old from Texas who thinks he is a rapper.... That sum's in up... im'a put him in his place now
There is no doubt in my mind that you were Born to Kill But you were born in 1969 - Your almost OVER THE HILL Theres no rappers in Texas! "Houston.. We have a Problem" Even NASA knows thats wack - and your not far from them And just cuz you have 1800 post dont make you a true Vet Your rhymes leave ya too broke 4 weed so ya smoke cigarettes My lyrics will singe your arteries n leave ya head on a post [like his avvy] I own you, ill piss on your dead body - and then your ghost Your a 34 year old from Texas - what'cha doin bat'lin on RB About to become the next Emcee scrollin in my marquee |
uppin for Domination............
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nice battle from u both i gotta say....u both had good personals...but i think Born had better ones....most of Dom's personals have been used many a times...lol...but i won't hold that against u really....but Born did have harder punches....and Dom had more wordplay...but with old concepts...here's the line i think that killed it all....
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BREAKDOWN Vocab - Tie Flow - Tie Punches - Born Personals - Born (more original) Wordplay - Dom (just alot) Metas - Dom (same as above) RhymeScheme - Tie Creativity - Born Complexity - Tie Born To Kill - 3 out of 9 Dominator - 2 out of 9 Tie - 4 out of 9 Overall - i gotta say Born took this mostly because his verse had more originality to it...and funny personals....i've already seen the ones Dom used plenty of times....so they don't have as much of an effect....nice read from u both though...no hate...just a vote... peace 4:20 |
Using my first uppin...
Drop ya votes and links... You know the deal... So do I... Vote up! Peace |
honest shit
flow-tie metas-no good ones punches-Dom vocab-born finisher-tie personals-Dom It was close but Dominator got this one wit the personals........ return the favor http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90916 |
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born get his one and heres why
wordplay=born flow=tie creativity=born...Dom the wheres Houston..and his age has been played too many times... personals=born structure=tie metas=tie,didnt see many form either punches=born poll vote=born closer than it looks...Dom lost cus of played rhymes..people always use those personals against...therefore born basically won becuz of creativity...and consistency need hoest votes here guys thanx http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91144 |
yo ait battle but played personals by dom
punches-dom personals-b2k wordplay-b2k vocab-b2k overall-b2k age shit was too played...no hate please hit this up honestly http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91151 thanks |
yo nyce battle yall heres my breakdown!!!!!
Flow-B2K Punchs-Dom Personals-B2K Volcab-B2K Overall-Born To Kill Aiigh B2k Took this 1 to day nyce battle thought Peace (v) |
opener-Born
closer-dom punches-dom personals-Born---good thing i didnt mention ya age...played originality-born multis-born enjoyment-born---multis got it for me complexity-tie overall-b2k no hate at all please vote here...if dude responds http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91011 |
Just getting in this morning...
Votes given are appreciated. Someone wrap this up and close this thread down. Thanks. Peace |
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