Polar Half's
 

mr. death, let's have a conversation
about how everyone's so incomplacent
to the point of hatin the fact, that your a popular guy
and that everyone has to meet you, but really, why?
i try to grasp my perspective as i contrast day and night
you and me, we've talked a lot, but i've never met life
yet life, i live with that fucker, he's like a brother
passed on as a gift from the great to grandmothers
it's wonder that keeps my mind wandering
to personificate the cycles of future w/ past tense apologies
remember that time we sat down to pass the time
and i payed a little mind
to how life's a grown man and your a midget; analogy for no afterlife?
now i'm not insulting your intelligence
i regard it as brilliance with infinite relevance
but check it real quick, because today i met someone else
probably one in your league; or at least on the same shelf
but hell, heavens, jesus christ, the devil, and man
regarded himself as a skitzophrenic fuck named sand.


by alex

good idea
but i dont think u did it justice

dunno whats with ur pieces lately..not really putting effort into them or what..
some of your drops are class..like the 'Cliff' one on rnR
dunno u didnt really put yourself out there on this one..seemed a bit bland
it was easy enough to read but lacking in depth even though the subject was a good one

all around a hot peice... havin seen any of ya shit lately...
looks good...it flowed nice n wasn't long so it didn't get boring...
nice shit... good twist...

sand your above this.....this is good but you never use to settle for good what has happened?

yea i gotta agree, this drop wuz kinda just there, im new so i dont know what u usually drop, but from what everybodys sayin this is not ur best work, possibly u rushin to put as many drops as possible i dont know, but look forward 2 your next drop.

PS- read and critique CHOKEDOGG aka Youngnut

you know what "Arena"(Sand in spanish), your shit is up in that caliber. Your words are well connected to fit their purpose and meaning to the sentence or verse.. I still need to put some real hard words like you, not for the fame or showboating, but for the mere fact tha i like what i write.