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Herbal Vs Brixton
ait here it goes
10-20 lines no hate no crew no dickride no feed basically no nonsense drop anytime before midnite tonight: dont matter when u want to drop its ku with me as long as its by midnite voting as follows: opener closer wordplay punches personals creativity originality vocab overal ait then yo check in and shit |
this is brixton's verse
There ya go.........keyed..good luk Quote:
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This is my verse
Your forced multies will succumb;…I speak in pun/*1 You can’t speak your own tongue cuz you’re literally dumb// You’re a punctured lung…powerless and ineffective/ I have a fetish for violence like AXE being corrective// Ya wrecked kid like your future with "H.I.V"….this is over/*2 Not a top dog yet ya have the best record in “L” Soldiers//*3 So ama have bill gates ship them infinite 4 leaf clovers/// You possess no presence, in S.S.… you define excess/ Now you can honestly go around bragging that you’re reck-less// Battling the all knowing, eating herbs for breakfast/ Another elite faggot crossed out of my checklist// Consuming vet’s piss, for votes so you can get this/ I got 6 foot hole to corroborate your death wish!// Just Sad that this is his life posting 23 times a day!/ Your rhymes are played therefore you must resort to sway// No way, you can beat me my skills are bonafide/ My toxic verse choking ya…my words are “cyanide”//*4 You wont survive this, my complex verbal attack/ “Banned for you skills you lack, plus you can’t hack/ beat by a user named Herbal? Damn you’re wack!”/(-Chrit)/ *1&2 he uses tons of forced multies and also he is getting kicked out of HIV because he is battling for rights to stay and his own members vote against him: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89991 *3 this fool has the best record out of his crew Lyrical Soldiers *4 used to go by Lyrical Cyanide |
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ok heres the breakdown
wordplay=brix vocab=brix flow=tie structure=brix metas=brix creativity=brix personals=brix punches=brix everything brixton...just an overall better verse herbal your verse flowed ok but lacked everything you need to have an overall good verse it was elementary and lacked wordplay therefore poll vote=brixton |
what the fuck???????????? i cant believe that shit yo
you must have not read this shit u fag!!! how the fuck did he get me in personals??? or in anything else for that matter this is a straight up dickride!!!! |
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but u still lost, it obvious...dont get mad at me and why would i dick ride a guy i am battlin that makes no sense u just mad cus u voted for me and i didnt vote for u i drop honest votes..dont accuse me of D/R... get over it and elevate |
yo honest...................
opener-Herb closer-HErb wordplay-nah punches-Brix had more personals-uh..HERBAL creativity-Herbal quotin Chrit Was Good originality-^^isn't it the same thing vocab-Yeah Herb overal-Tied Whudda bout metas??I Used the list Herbal gave.................... Metaphores-Brixton........ But still not enough...........two good verses but.................HERBAL |
yea obvious??? naw ure a fuckin herb
i dont care if u would vote for him if u explained it right and it wasnt a complete dickride YOU ARE A DICKRIDER i beat this foo badly i know my shit was better so how the hell did u give him all the categories?? cuz u didnt read shit and you dickrided fuck you this is going in I.R. |
Thanks for honest vote uppin#1 no more freeposting please
keep up the votes and please explain it good and well originality is like not played shit creativity is doing shit noone has done before example how i quoted chrit and reference to AXE that is wat i mean by creativity peace |
Punches-Tie
Flow-Brix Personals-Herbal Multi's-Brix Meta's-Tie Wordplay-Tie Creativity-Brix Damn this is close. Further Breakdown: Brixton, you had a level flow some stretched(5), good punches(8), hardly any personals(2), good multi's(7), straight meta's(6), descent wordplay(5), and nice creativity(9)=43/70 Herbal, you had descent flow some choppy(4), some descent punches(5), sick personals(9), straight multi's(6) and meta's(6), descent wordplay(5), and nice creativity(9)=44/70 Straight battle, herbal got this barley wid his personals, so close. ~1~ |
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Eh yo! This is Yaz's breakdown, check it:
Flow-HERBAL Multies-Tie Set Ups-HERBAL Structur-HERBAL Punchs-HERBAL(veary close) Personals-HERBAL Volcab-HERBAL Opener-Tie Finisher--Brixton- Wordplay--Brixton- Enjoyment-HERBAL Overall-HERBAL [-Brixton- ] Yo dawg I don't know what it was... I just wasn't feelin your flow as hard or sumthing, Iv seen you do alot better. Your Punchs would be amazing but you need to work on your set ups. I can't do half as good as you but yo, every EmCee has their days, You feel me dawg. No Hate. ------------------------- [HERBAL] I havn't realy payed attention to alot of your battles, but I'm startin to wish I did. You had amazing set ups and punchs. Plus i felt your flow 100% dawg, like fo real, K33P iT Cr@cKiN. This battle was some hard shit, and I can't do half as good as either of you. You both are amazing battlers, but HERBAL's just stood out to me or somethin, no hate or anything -Brixton- , so my vote is goin to HERBAL. K33P iT Cr@cKiN YO, Peace (\1/) |
thanks for votes uppin #2
*confused* Im starting to believe that most people dont know wat multies are good battle nonetheless brix keep up the explained votes yall peace |
opener-herb
closer-herb...if anyone says otherwise thats means for banning wordplay-brix punches-Herb personals-herb creativity-herb originality-herb vocab-herb overal-herb Brixton: Wtf?...Shit..Even Pac Looks Embaressed To Be Associated With You,(Heads Down) A Fukin Merk List In Ya Sig..Thats Played Chump,But I Guess Ya Need A Few.. ^^^^^^^^blah Wins To Represent That You Can Actually Compete With Retards.. This Boys So Choked For Lines, He's Even Bitin Lines Off Mozart... ^^^^didnt rhyme and was weak So Many Quotes In Ya Sig...So Gullable..Thinkin It Impresses Peeps I'm Riding Over This Loser Like An All Terrain Hummer Jeep...... ^^^u coulda gone sweetlike on personal but u came with weak 2nd line Fuck Sheep...I Aint Into Beastiality But Ima Rape You Anyways.. Seen More Disses From Ja Rule In The Flop Track Of "Rainy Days".. ^^^^this is plain wack Creativity?...This Means Creating New Sig Pics To Herbal... So I've Beaten Your Ass More Than Woopy Got Beat In The Colour Purple ^^^eh Jus Coz Ya Heavyweight Above Ya Sig..I'll Still Snap Ya Like A Twig Cemetry Staff At Work..Coz Now They've Got A New Hole They Gotta Dig ^^^first line wack, 2nd not good enough to save it But They Wont Let You Have A Ceremony..Coz Faggots Arent Welcome In Church Like Bashin Gay Bishops Your Left Lonely..Dont Home Truths Hurt? ^^^not good Ok Then..I Wont Hit Twenty..Coz Sixteen Is Enuf To Leave Your Lines Reeling... I'm Like A Toxin To Your Punches...Coz Now Your Crumbling,Tainted & Peeling... ^^^^^your best line -------------------------------------------------------------------------- HERBAL: Your forced multies will succumb;…I speak in pun/*1 You can’t speak your own tongue cuz you’re literally dumb// ^^^^^liked it and it was a personal You’re a punctured lung…powerless and ineffective/ I have a fetish for violence like AXE being corrective// ^^original..nice Ya wrecked kid like your future with "H.I.V"….this is over/*2 Not a top dog yet ya have the best record in “L” Soldiers//*3 ^^^^^alright So ama have bill gates ship them infinite 4 leaf clovers/// You possess no presence, in S.S.… you define excess/ ^^^^nice multi Now you can honestly go around bragging that you’re reck-less// Battling the all knowing, eating herbs for breakfast/ ^^^^eh Another elite faggot crossed out of my checklist// Consuming vet’s piss, for votes so you can get this/ I got 6 foot hole to corroborate your death wish!// ^^^like the first line only Just Sad that this is his life posting 23 times a day!/ Your rhymes are played therefore you must resort to sway// ^^^^played No way, you can beat me my skills are bonafide/ My toxic verse choking ya…my words are “cyanide”//*4 ^^^^first line blah, second line better You wont survive this, my complex verbal attack/ “Banned for you skills you lack, plus you can’t hack/ beat by a user named Herbal? Damn you’re wack!”/(-Chrit)/ ^^^great finisher ------------------ HERBAL took this one easily..............no hate |
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