keys to my imagination..
 

intense heat rises and spreads through my nervous system//
unexplainable euphoric feeling has taken over, yes da rythm//
moving to da sound of music is my addiction//
while yall are spittn and bitchin, i'll be cooking in da kitchen//
something good for da real hip hop culture to dig in and listen//
if yall don't feel me, then i got to baked buns for yall to be kissin//
i bone a petit girl just to change her world in an instant//
cuz my package is driven to the maximum submission//
music, words, and beats are the real reason//
got me spell bounded to just flow automatic on a mission//
to let yall know who the real hip hop followers are in dis show//
full of puppets attached to strings and controlled by an evil being/
wake up and smell my shit, relax and smell da wiff//
everyday i ask questions as i sit in my porch torching a spliff//

nice shit fo a newbie 7/10 yo keep'em commin

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Thanks.

He ain't a newbie, this guys soundin like he got at least some experience. 10/10 flow, structure and vocab, but you've got to find a way to get higher online. Keep droppin, i want to see how you come on the next drop...

koo koo

thanks alot doggy dogs, i really appreciate the complements. one thing is for shure, i am just like you, i love hip hop so much that i express it through my own words. i don't think i am da shit. i am just anotha young cat trying out and experementing shit. i gots mads respect for true honest replies. i don't get phazed by them, it just motivates me more. mad respect for all yall heads out there that just take this as a hobbie or a career either way.