names vs. verse112
 

10 lines
you first
no hate
reg rules
finish today or i wont show
you have several hours to spit

Nobody knows your name whats with the norwegian A?/
i'm a deface leave you nameless to a higher degree with nothing to say/
you give you ten lines i don't even need that but i'll take/
i'm not really a battle Mc but fuck it i'll fake it/
i never heard you spit so its hard to hit with personals/
but i hit hard so you'll wound and be constantly nursing those/
I never lost never one i'm new to the Rb scene just wanna battle some more/
sorry i got getta fame by leaving your name discraced, erased with scenes of gore/
cause i love how i hit a punchline everytime/
but this battle is stupid your probably already offline/

hidden n shadows...stay n the dark & eternaly castrade this verse
hitting n elbows...pierce ya throat & fatal wound...the open curse
u have nothing, even drugs like volume have energy & your worst
y use words like personals & punchlines...when u have no concept
yer like flames with no heat...u wont burn...this u will except
talkin bout gore? i'll snap off ya head...eat brain then explain
im a canabal...sick wit it runing with ya anatomy...u complain
just accept your finished & violated...u compare 2 nut stains
coming deranged & venom of insane...ya face a wrecked train
bloody ass tampon drips diped n syanide...these r yer remains

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verse 112 - flow was clean but just not enough venom in the punches for such simple wordplay

names - nice word play, n the punches nearer the end were coo

Vote = names

check my battle against poetic tendenceez

names took this in all aspects but verse's first line, that was ok, both need to step up game a lil, names is close to it...

not much of a decent battle but my vote goes to names...

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name took this

wordplay-names
punches-names
vocab-verse
strucutre-name

overall-names

peep my battle, we need honest votes

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91404

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hey dont forget bout me
i never forget bout u homie
lets close this with 3 more votes
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punches: names
flow: names
structure: names
multies: none
personals:none

vote: names
it was a one sided battle but both need to elivate a lil

peace

ok
well someone with 100 posts vote on this only
come on rb people lets start closing some threads
then we can start some new ones ok
lets get some feedback 2
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