Finishin' Moves (updated)
 

Direct Link:
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/k...ablissmusic.htm

Feedback and i'll return the favor, no bullshit, constructive critisism and props always welcome, specifics to! 1

i listened the first time and it was straight
your punches are on point very creative word play
you even flipped some played lines lovely

hey do me a favor and critique my audio called Suo Red Rum
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/5/ausaungyumusic.htm

just pm me what you think ... i liked your break down in my thread

Your lyrics are dope and the sound quality is good...but you downloaded the wrong "renegade" beat...you got the bad one, so the beat is skipping but your flow goes over it nicely...i give props...cause i downloaded that shit and tried to ride on it and i couldn't cause it skips too much...but props on the real dude holla back!

good lookin' on the feedback but the beat doesen't skip on my end in mp3 or wave format. maybe yer comp is readin shit wrong cause no one else has mentioned that. i'ma check my soundclick version and see if it maybe uploaded wrong cause there's no way i would have dropped to a beat that skips! 1

lol @ the intro. you got some hotlines, I liked the word play. Sound mad cocky on da beat, but thats what I like to hear. keep droppin.

peep my shit

nice flow & style, shud of come wit a different flow then the origional song tho, it almost sounds the same, but your lyrics ain't as good... i like it, but it could be better still... 1

bliss i like ya voice. i love the beat. vocals kinda low. you was offbeat in the beginning. i hate your flow on this song. but i hear your elevation every song you drop... you are goin to be killin niggas very soon. around 2 mins your delivery was tight. 2:30 was ok.

your ryhme scheme changes up to much.. you not talib kweli lol.
p.s your quality was not too good. but better than alot of katz. you need to get at me. pm me nigga. with a little guidance you will be real nice.

yo, i'm-a drop some more feedback on this 'cause u gave me a way better critique than what i said...

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And it starts..... the intro's funny still, the first couple lines sick, nice multi's an' punches mixed... you do got a really smooth flow, 'cept it's choppy at places, but even when it's choppy it on beat... i'm feelin' the punches on tha real, you rippin' this kid... shit.. is it MOF you battlin' shit, man... you could've come 1/2 as hard as this an' merked him... god damn, this has to be one the best disses i heard in a long time... ooo shit, ruthless punches... DAMN, "this battles a bigger joke than a german rappin"... shit dawg u fuckin' him up... this isn't even funny ne-more, it's jus' sad.. lol

yo, nice shit... 1...

Yo Blunt-MC good lookin out. I get different feedback from people. I know i'm on beat with the rips but some people don't like when i switch up and go choppy and some people do. good to hear yer still feelin that style.

I just represent myself and my own style and it's good to see that cats are feelin this shit. good lookin on all the feedback so far. 1

i'ma minimize my battles cause i'm workin on my album a lot more right now. Workin' on a few tight singles with REAL topics. Just an update on my shit. I'll drop rough drafts of my singles when i get them to a certain point in development.....

nice voice.....basic lyrics but u delivered em nice....kinda sound like obie-......nice ish....pc*1*

eminem beat.... got a pretty nice voice..... flow is kinda awkward, but still is kinda on its on this way....like it.... the beat is a looped version though, i can hear it skip...quality could be upped... beat skipped... and flow was a lil awkward at some parts....but still on.... nothin else i can gripe with it.... i love teh beat, like ya delivery...nice ish

good lookin oout to all that fed back on this drop. i'll always return the favors just drop the link or the song names. stay up!

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