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snakeyes 11-12-03 06:27 PM

Aint no love in the city (SCLA)
 
Streets of rage go by every day//
Time waits for no man, so turn the page//
Cant you see the hood is like a cage//
We cant get out of our own maze//
like a white rat, we are the experiment for da cocaine//
Dope, meth, and chiva are the venoms we try to sustain//
So easy to get a hold of, its your will power you must maintane//
Hold it steady, and be ready when you fall to da concrete//
that is da stage you don't wana be//
No family, just your own book to read//
Where did i go wrong, was i to weak?//
Possibly, cuz uncle sam got you in his clutches as you breath//
Inhale & Exhale this reality, south central l.a shows no pitty//
Need a hand, you get nothing but the love of the city//
Drugs, Sex and Alcohol are your only friends//
Lower and lower in the abyss of industrial trends//
thats the trap that will put all means to your end//

$pitacular 11-12-03 06:32 PM

flow was inconsistant, but I was feelin this. hear alot of rhymes like this, especially here (open mic) so my suggestion for elevation would be new approach... but the same ol same can be good if it's written right. good drop, keep elevatin

peace


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