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SmokaJoka666 vs Talon
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10-30 Lines No Crew/Hate/D.R. Votes No Recyclin Or Biting Blah Blah Blah I Spit First Good Luck To U. |
Humpty dumpty's putin together lines- "tryin to sew", where ya really "buyin ya flows", cas ya swingin from ropes but still aint "fly'n ah show"
Rippin ya smile so im "spittlin ya grins", only time hes comfortable is when "sittin on pins", an nailin his lines to my knee so they only "hittin my shins" Rip You In Person And Text-Too...But You Didn't Start Out On The "Right Foot" Like "Left-Shoes"..."After This W" "Before" You "R (are)" Brutally Mutilated I'm Eliminating Every "X-Q's (excuse)"...(whoa...X is after W...Q is before R) Drop explosive votes cuz "nines the score", I shine on text like "vinyl chords", 16 men, but 17th's is closest you'll come to "final four" Geting rid of this shit like you "before you toss", beat ya before, whats "one more loss?", and like you with the St. Christopher, I "whore your cross" Rip ya tonsils, now whos "tryin talk back!?", break this head more then "side-walk cracks", cuz ya missin fresh feeling like a dirty "white socks pack" U Treatin This Battle Like 'Dodge Ball'- Juss-Ta'-Skip, U Thrust-For-Dick, Cuz Ya Spits Aint Makin Us Hold Our Mouths.. U 'JUSS-IN-SHIT!' Say U 'Fresh?', Naw U 'Bout To Be A 'Crippled-Vet', Cas Cloning Me 3 Times Da Only Way U'd Spit Wit A 'Triple-Threat!!' This Turbulant's-Jolted..."Wipe Your Azz On Wood"...How Can This Herb-Even-"Post-Sh!t"... "Weeding Out These Candy" Azzes...Kicking Problem With "Chaps" Cuz This Key Was "Spur"-Of-The-"Mow-Mint I Maul-Commons...That's Why You "Wish You Never Met Me" Like "Carl-Thomas"..."Minimize This Freak's Verse"...Cuz Battling Talon You're Faced With A "Small-Problem"... Each Of My Lines-Rude...Throw "Clocks In The Air At 12" To Win This Showdown At "High-Noon"..."Reverse" The "Noose Id"entical To Slave Deaths...Make Sure This Faggot Will "Die-Soon"...(noose id=die soon) ***FINAL BLOW!!!*** (switchin it up a lil bit) Even If You Soil-Shit.. I'm Still Untouched Like Handles On Public Toilets... Ya Boys Oil-It.. And Like Dessert Before Dinner, I win, There I Spoiled It... |
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final verdict.... bit from more than one person....ur roasted yo... peace 4:20 |
Don't Get Punches Or Personals...Don't Vote.....Every Line Has It...Catch It!!
Ur Confusion's Wrote, "I'll" "Defeat" "This" "Kid" "With" "Useless" "Quotes".. Only Way U Will Beat Me Is If They Exchange The Users' Votes.. Battlin Me?? U Gotta Have The 'IQ Of Farm Tools'.....Ur A 'Stupid Hoe'.. I Give This Kid 'Double Pane' (pain), Like He Owns 'Two Windows'.. I'm Like A Handless Man With Ur Lyrics On Paper.....I Can't Even Feel U.. Trade N's And T's In (teasin) Ur Name, 'N Alot' Of Ur Battles U Still Lose..(Talon = N alot) U Stained? I'm Mr. Green, Ur On Death Row, And Ur Last Meal's Due (mildew).. Already Killed U, I'm Swingin Punches, But Just For 'Kicks' I'll Steal Shoes.. Chose A New Trend? U Got So Many Styles, Who Knows Where To Begin.. Like Empty River Ducts, Nobody Can Find Where Ur Flows Are In.. Verse Filled With So Many Quotes, Man I Feel Bad If U Wrote With A Pen.. U Could Bunk Up In A Chinese Prison And Still Not Be Close To A Wynn.. peace 4:20 |
uppin #1................................................ .................................................
peace 4:20 |
aight, it sure as hell seems like he bit but even if he didn't:
he still lost... he actually got Murked! winner: Smoka... check minez vs names... |
flow*smoke
disses*smoke punches*smoke structure*smoke..,.tha otha cats is sloppy to me personals*= vocab*= Vote*smoke yo hit dis up honestly its 4-0 me thanx http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90875 |
opener:smokah-like wow nice opener
closer:talon wordplay:smokah structure:smokah punches:smoka overall:smokah talon, u need to fix ur structure nice drop of both peeps just smokah came the hardest in this battle honset votes would be appreciated http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91494 and http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...3953#post903953 |
damn...someone forgot to poll...bastards...lol...fuck it................................................ ..........
peace 4:20 |
smoka merked this dude
flow=smoka structure=smoka wordplay=smoka punches=smoka my vote=smoka...........no hate hit this wit a honest vote http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91348 |
Well I Didnt Bite But I Prewrit LoL Sry U Killed Me Anyways Good Job
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word...no harm done yo....
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it don't matter...lol...good battle with u....just don't make ur verse look so shady or i will cause alot of chaos.... peace 4:20 |
aight...let's get the last vote in this battle....uppin #3................................................ .
peace 4:20 |
Floh:SJ
Creativity:SJ Structure:SJ Overall:SJ Vote:SJ yo this was a merk, sj just took it to him .............. yo could u hit up my battles being slept on...thanx links are in the sig, i lead 3-0 vote fairly... thanx |
Yeh this was a merk, Talon you discredited yourself admitting that this was a prewrit, I give the battle to smoka.
His verse was a lil harder even without the indiscretions on Talon's part. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90031 |
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