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names vs angellicalr
ok u drop first then ill give you an hour
then i'll go im not that good so lets finish today no matter what i wont post if its not done today reg rules 10 lines prefered |
um...fix this shiznit first to a BATTLE...
then i'll spit... then u'll spit... then we shall be done... good??? |
oh shit my bad...^^^^^disregard....
anywayz... mic-check this cat from utah, so much hoop-lah i thought i was tha tha one who was new-but/ names game was to move up too quickly, but will lose to too many MC's who r used up/ ~lift me strictly, u probably wanna get-wit me, so u can understand tha land of tha nifty/ but u got ur flows from a thrifty, just like 50, ur anotha Eminem dicky, see u at 60/ ~minutes diminuative flows, no wonder ur too small to be in this, u could get stepped on by a midget/ go-go gadgets and gidgets, out comes a mic that starts dissin his own master, cause tha fucken thing won't listen/ ~to u so wat u gonna do? act a fool, Luda would probably sue, and u'd be out of money, bankrupt, through/ who would've knew, this guy's face is blue, quit chockin on Adam's apple n give Eve a chew/ ~on it got this child covered wit preteen condoms called baby-bonnets, still in tha crib, already dyin from cronic/ cause i blew in into ur noggin, now u thinkin of me like a comic, laughin ur ass off n pass out, wake up next to Bin Laden!/ simple if i do say so... |
melting threw like a manipulative, misery, machine...it's all good
nobody knows where ya from...u have stretched lines...no ''could'' let it be beatles u say...thought u liked rap? you a broken flood what u wanna no me for? why did u say this n ya bio? cuz u mud u say yer interests r freestyling? but u spelled freestyling wrong i no it dont mean much...although you eat huge...beggin for slong claiming 2 b a rapper end of story...yer mistaken...u have im sorry what does the r stand for n ya name? angellica raped...yer done now i no u about 2 have a nervous break down, stole ya emotions quarterbacks increasing sacks & making take downs...no ''potion'' |
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AR..... work on ya flow...
you had good personals, did ya research about him being in utah! i think that you came harder! names good spit too! ( i dont even know yall) lol vote- AR |
hey thanks for the honest vote kind lady
i wanted some feedback but i guess no one really cares n e more __________________________________________________ _ |
your verse was ok, you just need more multis and take out the "" and the ?s u know......... just to clean out ya flow....
thanx for not being mad at me when i voted i mean hey ppl might think differently __________________________________________________ __ what does the r stand for n ya name? angellica raped...yer done now i no u about 2 have a nervous break down, stole ya emotions quarterbacks increasing sacks & making take downs...no ''potion'' ^^^ that was sick |
ok that explaines everything
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mic check, 1, 2, uppin, uppin, n uppin some more...
uppin numeral 1 thank u very much... thanks for tha vote, lady... yea, i don't flow for battles, wat can i say...? |
i think angel got this one easily-----names ya flow was all over the place--structure seemd aight but no real hard punches-------angel had betta disses-----vote=angel
peep my battle with doube0 in my sig and vote honest thanxxxxxxx |
uppin numeral 2...
check mine n i'll check urs... come on naw, n don't forget to poll vote ;) like cut that is... |
opener:names
closer:tie wordplay:Names structure:Tie punches:AR overall:AR nice battle y'all but angellic took this one, ar you need to work on your structure a lil dawg, ur lines are stretched. names u got nice wordplay, u jus need to elebate a lil nice drop both u guys, keep it up aiight peace |
i think angel got this one easily-----names ya flow was all over the place--structure seemd aight but no real hard punches-------angel had betta disses-----vote=angel
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