emotionally bruised
 

Crying in my room
Not sure what to do
I am so sick of crying over boys like you
Why do I always feel rejected?
Why do I always feel like it’s me?
Just as I started to love you, and care for you tenderly.
That’s when shit hit da fan
You got up and vacated,
Man u fucking ran.
I am at the end of my wits
With the shit I have done
I see myself falling for you
And I don’t know what to do, I am so confused
Man if you like me why is it so hard for you to show it too.
Because my caring for you is real.
I would never lie to you
Cheat on you, or leave you like those other did to you.
Man I don’t understand why you leave me so confused
If you really like me then stop leavening me emotionally bruised.

~Let me know what you guys think and if you have any Suggestions ~

Good job. Scheme was a lil off in parts. Kind of like u rhymed then u didnt. But it was ok. Structure was good. A lot of emotion runnin through this. Everything was felt, and believe me, i can relate. Overall good job. Much respect. Keep droppin.

thank for u advice i take it to heart

keep em comming guys

This was good. Your emotions were felt. Most guys have a problem and don't want to show stuff. There to worried about there social status to get attached and all this other crap. Guys have problems coping with themselfs and telling there true feelings. I see it at school but on here It different. Keep your head high and don't blame yourself or get depressed. Thanks for the great read. Spect JT