FreeYayo vs dom-N8
 

Rules as before:
10 lines
You spit first
Usual voting rules

OK FreeYayo, you up.................................

Here we go, I gotta spit the first lines
guezz cuz I'm first in line I'mma b the winnin' rhyme...
U scared to go first ? U like a fucking rookie.
U scared to drop a verse ? Cuz lil' fucking pussy!
3 posts to call me out? dontchu fucking push me...
guezz u dun really know the freestyle concept,
I'll show u how it goes and leave u all emberrased.
damn thought I'd find some goddamn challenge
but I came out against dom-N8 at junior battlin'
yo I'm over with this battle, his only option left is beggin'

Yo look,

Took ages to spit cos like a clumsy neurologist – you lost ya nerve,
Belgium rappers belong on chocolates, understand ‘An-twerp’/
My punches hit you hard like mens nutsacks hit ya chin,
Blind men voting is the only way you’ll get a win/
You shouldn't bother spittin cos I don’t like ‘belgium waffle’,
You couldn’t get laid if you were a carpet in a brothel/
It’s time to ‘Free-ya’ mind so I’m gonna hand you a laxative,
I can’t tell which end ya *’face-is’, cos from either end you spit shit/
‘Freeyayo’s’ scared now, he’s been ‘dom-N8’d’ sure-thing,
News flash, this just in dom-N8 wins a 5 - 0 K.O. decision/


*face-is = feces (shit)


Let's get votin peeps............................................. ...................

I gotta give this one to Dom. I can't vote yet, but Dom took this on all accounts. Hit this up guys http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91338

opener:dom n8
closer:dom n8
wordplay:dom n8
structure:tie
punches:dom n8
overall:dom n8

both you cats just need to keep doing what you doin.

uppin for votes............................................. ..............................
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when you done put up an honest vote on this:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...highlight=domN8

domin8 takes this he had punches".....the other guy didnt have any thing that impressed me so im going with domin8 had a better style

uppin for ya votes.............
when ya done put up an honest vote on this too, it's getting slept on............................
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forgot to post the link:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...highlight=domN8

uppin............................................. ..........
when ya done vote on this:http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...highlight=domN8

I think Dom swept this based on Style, Opener, closer, flow, punches, and personals. Hit this up when you can. You can come and write an honest opinion now and then drop a vot lata http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91286

opener - dom
flow - dom
punches - dom
structure - tie
wordplay - dom
closer - dom
overall - dom

if i could vote i would vote for dom-N8, he had an altogether better verse....

check out my battles below...

yo, DOM took this 4 sure, he punches were funnier, hes flow was good too...freeyayo was aiight too btu his punches need to be harsher... good battle thouh, the both of ya...

PCe

OK that's 3 - 0 me.

Still uppin............................................. .......................................

When you done hit this up wiv an honest vote cos it's gettin slept on like a ho:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...highlight=domN8

uppin for ya votes.......................................
keep explaining ya votes peeps......................................
when ya done vote on this:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92287