FRK_ttk VS Tha Duce
 

10-20 lines
you spit 1st
no hate or dr

yo, yo
1,2 mic check...ready to murder this fag//
I'ma a pail faced killa wale//
run at u wid muthafukin pistols in the air//
Cuz u no u can't Battle rap//
every1 reads ur battles...there crap//
Ur tired of goin first...thats cuz u shit u need to reherse//
Practice makes perfect...well thats only if u Practices perfect//
This site needs rappers not bitches who sound like ur dads wife//
You sound like a gansta who neva made it to thug life//
you need to stop triin and find urself a new hobbie//
Bitch is triin to sell himself to a fagget in a gay lobbie//

IM a mother fucken God sent, lyrical Prophet//
Lord sent me manuplate life, as a terrorist of tha mind//
Have total control over all your gay lines//
ya spent intirerly to much time makin homo sexual ryemes//

change it up---


My lyrical missles cut throught the wind and make a fucked up whistle//
snapping necks, stinging souls and crumbling to bits and pieces bone grissels//
leaving your body hollow~and families full of sorrow//
with your spirit lost in my worldwind of emotions floating//
holdin' no weight~~I've sealed your fate//
go play patty cake with your ass and help each other masturbate//

Murder---



Im about them punchlines~~fuck that I ain't Chris Tucker mutherfucka if you don't like em' then fuck ya//
meet me on the corner of your block and watch my flames send you into shock//
and cremate your body quicker than when they burned up 2Pac's cause my hollow tip saliva burn when I unveil these concealed thoughts//
offendin' me like I won't spill your brains worst than JFKennedy//
you better beg spitz on bended knee and quickly exit the vacinty//
and pray to Rev. Run cause it's Red Rum (murder backwords) whenever spitz gets vexed//
my verbal tecs clear out sets and decapitate shoulder from necks//

Oh No I Didnt----

so fix your face bitches before I rape your moms with broken broomsticks and give her pussy blisters//
fuck her in the ass with a spiked dick~kodak the shit and send rotten.com the pictures//
come to her wake and smack up your pops before his tear drop//
cuz why she pushed you two out her cock is a mystery no one can solve//
like who killed Notorious BIG and Tupac//


***Ok sombody clean this body up and get rid of it***

aight....u went over a bit but i guesss u needed
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yea sorry i went over 2 lines but i had to finish my thought
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opener:tie-none of em ryhmed
closer:duce
wordplay:duce
structure:FRK
punches:duce
overall:duce

duce, fix ur structure, an keep eleavtin both of you guys



honset votes would be appreciated
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91494

thanxDouble 0 Seven for ur input
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Uppin for votes
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duce took this in all aspects even though his verse was hard to follow most of tha way through...

vote: duce

check minez against names...

comon vote man
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damn stop slackin and vote
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upin
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Vote people damn
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WOW DUCE YOU WROTE A LOT

PUNCHES=DUCE..STRETCHED THO
SUSTAINMENT=DUCE
FLOW=DUCE
METAS=DUCE
ORIGANALITY=BOTH
VOTE=DUCE

MAKE SURE YA HIT THIS UP#
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91565

Duce took this but he needs to fix his structure

structure-FRK_ttk
Flow-Duce
Metas-duce
Punches-Duce

Vote-DuCe