It's Mine (Freestyle)
 

It's been a minute since I dropped some shit... so while I had the time I grabbed a beat and just spit fire!

but yea check this shit out... AND DROP FEEDBACK

It's Mine (freestyle)

get at me

replied too:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...4667#post904667

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91347

ok.. beat sounds like some old school shit, its wack.
Quality is HORRIBLE. flow aint to bad. take out that reverb. sounds like you got a shitty comp mic. are you white? you got sorta whiteboy accent. but you flow is coo. actually you got lots of potential. damn lots of niggas on here be havin potential. you need better equipment.

you need help. but with practice you should be fine. also read some tutorials on mixing. look in the audio help section i think opey was kind enough to put tutorials in there.

a'ight thanks... and na I'm black. uppin

Like the beat....i used it before back in the day.....ur voice sounds
low...and quality sounds like theres an echo in ur room....good
flow....u got that down....thats prettymuch it....nuthin much else
to say...

Aiyyo I liked this man. But its tha reverb that was kinda annoyin just to be honest. But overall I liked it. Tha old School beat was decent. Ur flow was decent and everything. Cant wait till hear more. Peace.

if this was a freestyle, why'd you add the reverb and add some ad-libs? a freestyle is to show raw skills, I can understand noise reduction and hard limiting, but no need for anything else.

I'm not trying to be a hater either, I'm giving you tips to up your skills ya know? feed back like this was what made bigger netcees like warbux...even though I personally dont like warbux. but like I said no hating, I cant even freetyle myself.

one other thing...alot of rappers dont have originality anymore, they pick out a favorite main stream artist and do like he does...you sound exactly(no lie) like a mixture of fabulous and cam'ron... and In my opinion both of those emcees are skum...maybe they sell alot, but you shouldn't copy any artist just because there succesful or for any reason. Look at rappers who try to be like eminem if you need more proof and disagree with my statement. there's no exceptions, you need to create your own style, I can even help you out with that, my aim is fredwycheckxxx

and the last thing. there's an unwritten rule alot of netcees have started to follow lately. dont rhyme about guns...you'll be looked down upon mainly because alot of peeps just think it's stupid to act hard and gangster on the net...I personally believe peeps just put on an image to cover up who they really are. which again takes away originallity, also never rhyme about cars and bitches(well...not often...it makes you look...as whack as lil wayne...notice he maid a whole song about bling bling and he has no skill at the same time but he's very successful...peeps need to listen to music more.) it would help to focus more on issues in your life, problems in the world, shit like that. I open up on tracks, I've learned to not care what peeps think of me, I'd rather be honest than be ill, ya know? I guess that's all I got to say

dont take any of this in the wrong way either

-peace

Beat is "It's Yours" by Wu-Tang. . just for the kids that didn't know.

Yeah, you're quality could be improved, but I'll just deal with it. .
Flow is nice, voice is cool. . Sounds kinda like mine. .
Lyrics are nice for a free, if it's really a freestyle. .

Keep droppin`. .

And P.S. - Fred, I've been meaning to ask. . Why in the world did you name yourself after a football player?

lmao alot of peeps wanna know that

the guys name is FRANK wycheck

my name is fred

it's kind of a stupid, I mixed some cats name up with fred when this kid fred was like a retarded kid and the kat I was really talking about was one of the top football players in the highschool team. It was just a mistake and I had a wycheck jersey on that day, I forgot how exactly it turned into fred wycheck, but EVERYONE called me fred wycheck and that name sounded so tight to me and I just kept it. ya know? even though the name came from a mistake, I kinda started rappin from a mistake, so yea...I started rapping by being something I wasnt and called myself dynasty...I used to say i had 22's and all of that shit...I used to be whack...now I hate people who act like I used to act, I was so fake when I started.

-peace

Fred there's a lil somethin called good memory... I spit the lyrics and just played it back to myself and thats how I'm able to do ad-libs.... real simple if u think about it,and as for the car and bitches shit ..............so what if u don't like it, a lot of other people don't have a problem with it. So what I had 2 occasions in that track where I spit about a chick, does that offend u? are u hiding something? remember this, different strokes 4 different folks, everbody does things a little different.

I need 2 find my own style... just because I like rhyming sylables.

oh yea, don't take it the wrong way.

lmao toochey(sp?)

the style, I'm talking about your voice and delivery, not your rhyme scheme, ya know?

"Fred there's a lil somethin called good memory... I spit the lyrics and just played it back to myself and thats how I'm able to do ad-libs"

but I was telling you that it didnt sound good for a freestyle, I'm saying freestyles were meant to be raw, and I just thought it would be a good idea to leave them off. that was just my opinion though.

and I'm glad you see that I'm just trying to help you improve.

You should've made that clearer... if you're really trying to help someone "improve". Cuz if I had told u, "if thats a freestyle why'd u put ad-libs" u would asume I'm tryning to say somethin about ya freestylin ability.

sorry :'( do you still love me buddy?

yo......not bad for a freestyle......but quality iz ass you know? propz for postin a freestyle, decent flow.....decent drop
return the luv
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92323

wow...I just read all that shit I said lmao...sorry man, didnt mean to be so critical, lmao, I didnt get any sleep at the time, ya know? you can do what you want, it isnt my place to tell you what to rap about, sorry bout that shit

and yo, troublesome, what part of michigan are you from man? I go to jackson michigan for summer vacation and christmas, just wanting to know if that's anywhere close to where your located.

-peace