To Take Life
 

Just a little something I had off the top, I was wondering if anyone wanted to flip it with the topic, but anways, i guess I'll see what the thoughts are on this....

the tip of the blade to the edge of the knife//
consumed with pain, wanting to take life// :shoot:
to end this never-ending breath, to end the tears//
ending all sorrow and taking away all fears// tumbling off a cliff, plumbiting to the ground//
taking away all memories, that in life will never be found//
no one will understand, while living in misery//
uncontrolled earges for death, sight growing weary// :gfy:
will god accept the soul, when it makes it way to the sky??//
and until that day comes, still wondering, wondering why// :banghead:

thought this was a pretty basic drop, the flow could have been better, if the structure was more constant, but it was ok, but way too short....oh and a would stop putting the faces at the end of the lines it dont look good dawg...all in all this was a pretty weak drop, but the concept was ok, just wasn't delivered too good....aight....Pc