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~Beauty~ (Self & MeNTiLL)
-Self-
Blue eyes, thirty six, twenty four, thirty six Body in the shape of an hourglass, shoulder hips Straight long blond hair, a flat stomach C cup, filled up, not as flat as her back And the rear that would make Prince Charles un-queer No Thank You - Give me someone a little bit different Like the girl I’ve got for instance Cinnamon pigtails, which use to be pink If you’re lucky enough, with a smile she’ll give you a wink Chest and ass, to me the best The day god made her he was a perfectionist To me, THAT’S as pretty as can be If I were to lose my sight, I’d want her to be the last thing I see -MeNTiLL- People often tell me that Beauty is found In the eyes of the beholder Well I found Beauty ... The problem is Im too afraid to hold her Saggy shoulders Black under my eyes She causes me to lose sleep Beauty's 'posed 2 be the same depth as skin But that's still too deep So Im writin' on a loose leaf Tryna define the thoughts trapped in my head I would pray my soul to keep But lately I've been prayin' to keep her instead Submerged in bed, my heart achin' With her head upon my chest And urge to wed, if im not mistaken But nothin' is said upon the rest I long for breath juss one gasp Of air, it would really free my mind I'd try harder to explain Beauty's design But Im blind, I hope U appreciate my attempt for tryin |
self
i liked yours a little bit better 7/10 mentill yours weren't to bad either but it needed work 6/10 keep postin guys |
Upp did ity.
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Illest shit ever.
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Mentill is Ill, but it looks like Self came harder this time...10/10 overall for trying to describe beauty...that's hard as it is...
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Word ... Thanks for the feedback ... Uppin' for some more ... Peace
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