Xplicit~Lyrics [vs] 1liner
 

rules:
U SPIT FIRST
10-15 LINES
NO D/R
NO HATE
NO CREW VOTES
NO BITING
NO FEEDING
NO BITCHING
NO FREEPOSTING

SPIT A.S.A.P

yo


if i shot you tommorow you'd still DIE TODAY/

i'll serve you like burger king- you can have it YOUR WAY

but in the battle of the WITS your SPITS couldn't CONVINCE

the SHIT you WRIT was SICK --even if you SPIT BRICKS with CHICKS sucken ther own DICKS--for KICKS

how IS IT you think your XPLICIT/ i'll leave you TWICHIN __WISHIN someone would VISIT-

your LIFELESS MOLD- while it LIES THERE COLD

LINED WITH HOLES/ EYES EXPOSED to the LIES YOU TOLD

its a murderrap other RHYMES UNTOLD/ i'll tear out your cortex to show the world the ryhmes I HOLD


W?E you wanted ma verse now so this is what you get
stupidness

When I’m reading your lines I thought no one could get any worse…
You made me look twice…cause I couldn’t believe that was ur verse…
You haven’t yet won a battle…what makes you think you can merk me?
Did you even have punches??…cause if u did they didn’t hurt me…
You changed to a new style…do u actually think this one is ILL??…
You got no wins man…and u never can and a definite never will…
Why is your name 1-liner?…you couldn’t even beat me with a hundred…
Change it to WACKliner…are you retarded?…sorry I jus wondered…
Im murdering you and anyone else who dares too…Your life?…erased…
Rules say 10-15…I can beat u wit 10, now wit 5 losses…that’s a disgrace…

uppin>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>.>>

i guess we get no luv
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opening - xplicit
punches - both
flow - xplicit
creativity - both
personals - xplicit
metas - 1liner
complexity - xplicit
enjoyment - xplicit
overall - if i could vote my vote would go to xplicit. no hate 1liner, i just thought his was better.

1liner was completely merked in this battle.....all categories go to explicit......1liner..how the fuck you going to come tell me I'm wack as hell when you're fuckn 0-5 and about to be 0-6? props to you explicit..sick verse.....1liner..you suck dick

1liner - yo man...ya structure n flow needs more consistency. also, unless the hits have sum kind of relevance to each other people r going to keep merkin ya.

ex:
i'll leave you TWICHIN __WISHIN someone would VISIT- this was a great line but what does it have to do wit:
its a murderrap other RHYMES UNTOLD

keep elevatin

explicit - not too much heat but flow, structure, n everything else was nice

the u couldn't beat me wit a 100 was a nice personal.

if i could vote it'd be explicit

What up with all these nigga's having the same name as me.

this a was really close battle..not a good one..but close

i give it to 1liner because of his punches..and style..Xplicit no hate but ur shit was tooooo original. u need to work a bit on your structure and stop putting.... period....in.....between....ur....words

PZ

opener:xplicit
closer:Tie
wordplay:Tie
structure:Tie
punches:xplicit
overall:xplicit

xplicit took this one with harder hitting punches, 1liner ur structure changes in nearly every battle, an u gon get banned soon for havin too many battles open.



plz vote honestly on the battle in my sig!!!!

opener:xplicit
closer:xplicit
wordplay:Tie
structure:xplicit
punches:xplicit
mutlies: 1liner
personals: xplicit
enjoyment: xplicit
overall:xplicit

actually this was one sided, but it was a gd battle

peace

x got dis 1 on flow punches n personals gd verse man... hit dis up plz http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92528 ......thx........................pz

Xplicit~Lyrics took this easily due to better punches, flow, personals, wordplay, and flow. It's nice to see 1Liner elevatin tho.

vote= XPLICIT~LYRICS

X won, everything
easily
but X, hered advice:

you got potential. but before you go out and enter real challenges, make sure ur verses are LESS PLAYED. because that was very played. nice tho for a noob.

advice for 1liner:
immediate wackness emergency center. . . .

yo can u please check this battle out. its already 10 ups and only 2 votes. the most slept on battle in history.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=91956

xplicit takes this....

Better verse...
Overall...
Better punches etc..

Vote- xplicit