So U Wanna Be A Thug
 

This is a track of a group me and my boy Genocide got called Renegades ... He takes 1st Verse ... I got 2nd ... We both got 3rd Verse and the hook ...

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/5/mentill.htm

It's not a deep track ... It's on some braggin' shit ... Really I juss want some honest feedback ... If U think it's shit say so and why ... If U like it say so and why ... Peace

k listening 1st dude is off beat..2nd dude ok.track hot...lyrics are blah. do-do track.....gun shots effect aint necessary..............3/10

1st dude's flow is way off.....hook is aiight but the gun shots...
seriously....isn't appreciated....Mentill....aiight flow...put more
emotion into it....kinda silent....3rd verse is better than the first
two......not a bad track for a start.....

intro to long.... beat is ok.
ooh. lay off the sound effects on the first guy.. sounds like he using a laptec. its all muffled and shit. i see he gotta develop his flow... thats a hard flow to get mastered but its sick as fuck when you do... ok. them gunshots dont do any justice. mentill you got nice flow. your vocals are too low... quality is what is really killin you. thats like most the problem on this site. your lyrics/flow is tight.
plus the first verse is higher then the chorus. yall just gotta eq better. ill put up a tutorial on eq.

Yea no doubt ... The feedback is appreciated peeps ... I ain't really ill wit Cool Edit ... plus we fuccin' wit a shitty mic ... So Im juss doin' wit wat I know nah mean ... I'll have some more up on that page soon ... peace

Ahh, first thing I noticed, is how bad Sal-V already ripped this beat. . lol

Whoa, first guys flow is way off. Lyrics, from what I could tell, were pretty good, though.
Gun shots sound pretty wack.
Your verse is a lot better than the first was. Flow is good, lyrics are nice. Solid shit from you.
Third verse is better than the first was. . Flow got a little better. .

LMAO ... Word ... Wasn't no disrespect to Sal V ... I didn't know he did a track to the beat ... But thanks for the feedback ... Peace