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e.coli vs 1liner
5-6 bars (10-12 lines)
no crew, hate or d/r votes explain all votes check in and spit |
checkin in
the beat starts i fuckin hate you---i wish my words would rape you/ so i can send a message to h. lectur with details on how i ate you did i mention your fake to/ you hate truth/ i feel bad for the bitch THAT MADE YOU e.coli --<<<< he gunna die/ six times with sick lines that i write ------u gunn stay unsighned hype as long as you alive your realize that my sty is nice as i continue to write -----your ass is mine tonight!!!!!!!!!!!aight i aint good at text but i'll rip a mic/ rearange ya brain to flip ya lines/ grip it tight and squezze ya life till you die my mind is tryin find the line to tear you apart with// my minds like killar guerillas ravagen ya apartment WHY"D you start this/ AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH shit |
nothin fantastic but if you read it with the beat i wrote it to its made ill
i should make this verse a audio LOL |
aight here is my checkin i will drop in about 10 min
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s0rry for the freepost
1liner dont duck my battle u have to spit now ************************************************** ************************************************** ************************************************** ************************************************** ******** |
aight my bad playa !!!!!!!!!!>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
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aight here is a quick keystyle
he loves givin head...he thinks hes a blood cuz is ass is consistently red... 1liner stabbed himself wit a pencil to say he like 50 cent.....full of lead.... he made a dick dissappear in his mouth now he thinks hes magic like david blane.... he wants to be a terrorist....so he beat off on his first flight... ....so he could say he hi-JACK-ed on a plane.... like a blind kid tryin to shadow box....all ya punches miss.... 1liner has a stomach ache...now he thinks he is spittin illness.... 1liner loves whackness...if u dont have any wins then u are his hero.... damn kid youre not a loser..but like ya win percentage your a zero.... 1liner put sugar in his mouth to say his rhymes were as sweet as mine.... all his punches missed me im ok....dont worry im fine... ...its just too bad i could have one this battle wit just this 1 line.... open for votes |
yeah i no what u mean 1liner i want 2 do audio battles
but dont no anything really about it i read some tips and stuff, just need some free time & money when yer verse sounds ok on text can be made hard on audio i no exactly what u mean looking forward 2 this guys verse goodluck i guess i'll hit it up as soon as i get 100 posts can someone check my battles out names vs verse112>2-0 names vs copyrighted>0-0 _____________________________________________ |
^^^^^please dont freepost...............it just clogs the thread............
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for real dawg we need votes>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
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yeah 1 liner, this might have sounded better on audio.............
e.coli kinda had metas, punches and everything needed in text battles....not too bad...........check out my battl vs da kid or somebody.................... |
Not a bad battle
Opener: Coli Closer: Coli Flow: Coli Personals: Coli Punches: Coli Winner: Coli 1liner- You had some good shit in your rhymes. keep it up. Maybe I'll battle ya in the near future. Can both of yall help me clear up some threads? http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91338 |
u got to poll vote cuz..............................
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my bad dawg. It's there now http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91338
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aight this was not a great battle at all but E coli gets it based on it made more sence and was not so simple that my 2 year old daughter could have spit
vote---- e coli my battles http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=91613 http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=91698 |
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