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passage to pass time
wordy fragments of thoughts
worldly touches of ideas that will never truly represent you that could never ever be true with all these broken sentences come the fact that you are doomed to succumb to a life of broken promises and spite and as i said before unbroken fight i miss how it all used to be before instead of these drops it was more a pour of new ideas that werent done long ago instead of this shit that is spewed, ego blackouts and nightcaps and crushed pills freedom and thoughtlessness and heatchills bring more things than you could know before you especially since theres nothing else to do i feel that those who want to learn do and thinking is one of my broken virtues in those nights when no one else can tell what i live in is very close to thier hell no one will ever really know you or me most of them dont even try to fucking see just as i will never know any of you any more than the words that get spewed |
fitting title and good content but it didt really hold my interest, its good though dont take my lack of interest for lack of talent, it is good, 1luv.
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this poem is kinda esoteric, now that i think about it. i dont know if it can hold anyones interest but mine, haha
..it kinda has to do with the pretentiousness and selfserving nature of internet posting, how people dont try to understand anything but themselves. ...thanks 1000 for reading it and the feedback, i will try to interest my intended audience more in the future |
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