Beg For Mercy vs "Dooce"
 

HERE WE GO THEN
YOU SPIT 1st
20 MINS MAX REPLY TIME

ight i got u be sure to post right after i do same rulez apply to u!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

no dr/votes
no hate votes
no crew votes
votes must be explained
up the battle i dont wanna get slept on
and no biting rhymes

RIGHT OK OK OK KO KO KO
LETS GET THIS SHIT GOIN MAN WE ANT GOT ALL-DAY
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(yo harlem in the building)
(lets get this bitch poppin)

uhuh, yo dis nigga a pussy but he still wanna act mean/
i'll kill him wit the streetsweeper so he can keep his nose clean/
so dont act fast jack when the thing in the trunk can leave ya head in ya ass crack, i still cant get past that.

now when his boys ask is he on tha grime/ all he say is i got shit on my mind/ ya ride still wearinn 10's, you aint hard cuz u wearin timbs, dis da 50 ja battle, yall know who wins/ i keep a heater in my pouch/ murk u and leave ya body in a dumpster wit oscar the grouch/ yea and dont make me mad/ i'll leave u fired up like rockets on a launch pad/then laugh at ya funeral when im ridin in a stretch jag/but u know what,fuck a gun nigga wear a vest i spit at u bitches so protect ya chest/ dis is all for rappin and money i said squash the rest/ he act like he got girls when he just talk shit/ when the only time he see ass is when he kissin it

----CHECKIN IN --------
YO I'd rather have a hundred-thousand true heads by me
Than one million of your fake fanatics behind me
I keep it grimy, chase me, you will never find me
I take you out in two or three minutes, you can time me
You the dopest MC? I leave that ass sizzlin
I'm givin more rhythm than gang rapes in prison
You small time, you ain't a pro
Yeah you kick the raw rhymes, but your show and your flow
That's all mine
Oh silly me, if I call on my lyric ability
I'll bring it right, straight to your jaw, free delivery
Get wit me, now I spit rap
I represent peace and knowledge, but I will contradict that!
Click-a-click clap
You don't wanna battle me, you wanna scat away
I battle Monday, Tuesday, Wednesday, Thursday, Friday
Wait, let me check the schedule again, Saturday
SO I KILL YOU AND MAKE THAT BAD SMELL GO AWAY

opening - both
flow - beg for mercy
punches - beg for mercy
structure - beg for mercy
closing - dooce

dooce - 2/5
mercy - 4/5

overall - beg for mercy won this

beg for mercy - u had a nice verse untill the last 4 lines.. work on ya ending..