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Diss~Play vs HOLSTER
8 lines
no d/r hate crew or bs votes ill spit first |
Holster gets devoured, with punches that pack power/
You get negated, like a "faggot that lacks flower"// Snapped and scoured, fake as your name talkin bout guns herb/ Like your sig, you get "thrown down in one word"// This guys a holster, but hes missin the heat/ Like Miami in winter, "hot headed but cold feet"// I mold beats, that be crackin ya spine/ In 8 lines I can comfortably say this victory's mine// |
hurry up and spit kid
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DISS~PLAY displays full wackness//
ya rymes are like words stuck inbetween brakets// man ur skill is washing away, mine is durable// beat this guy so bad, n leave his wack ass wit a disease that is not cureable// i use my dynamics to reck you// im a true merduerer now, because csi came to inspect you// you like a golfer always over par// my flow is untouchable like the north star// |
ok... thanks for the compliments in the verse.. now vote quickly and lets get this over with people
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Diss.....YOu better close one of your battles or your going to get dq-ed..........You have 3 open.. Ill hit this up and Vote after like like a few more posts.......
I got to hurry so All I can say is Punches-Diss Flow-Diss Rhymes-Both OVereall DissPLay |
up for votes
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METAPHORES - Diss~Play
VOCABULARY - neither PUNCHLINES - Diss~Play STRUCTURE - Diss~Play CREATIVITY - Diss~Play PERSONALS - Diss~Play OPENING - Diss~Play CLOSING - tie MULTIES - tie FLOW - Diss~Play OVERALL - Diss~Play Return the favor: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93392 |
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