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Diss~Play vs Rap Jesus
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no d/r crew hate(that means you nitro) bs votes blind spits |
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My Verse:
I tourcher fake emcees who puts out open callouts not knowing who gonna reply/[1] The tables have turned around now and Jesus will not die but Diss Play will get crucified/[2] My lyrics could nail u beneath da earth close to da core so u just got burnt and turned to ashes/[3] Ur chances of winning is NILL da only way u can get a victory is if u dick ride the judges/[4] I'll throw punches at ur body and fuck up ur intestines and make u vomit ur guts out/[5] Spit acid at ur face, disfigure ur appearance and make u shit through ur mouth/[6] (god damn) LikeHitler I filter out your bad rap,crush you with mah god sent talent,make you "relapse" back into a permanent "nap"/[7] Throw you back on ya "daddy's" lap, so he can rot reminiscing bout the ass he used to "tap"/[8] Fucked your bitch in da throat, made her up chuck, cuz she swallowed my dick 2 da gut/[9] U can go peep dat pic on Smut the slut went deeper than 18 holes of put-put/[10] gd luck peace |
aight im spittin now forgot to before lol
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I'm blastin ya, back to africa, makin this faggot fall/
I'm passin ya, only time you "passin me is in basketball"// this aint a battle, more like a gun, cuz for me its just a "steel"/ Your shit aint happenin dawg, like "fiction on a news-reel(real)"// I smack rap Jesus, told you not to make me "cross"/ You out of place on rapbattles, like rabbi's in a Mosque// This "fly"weight gets tossed, fuckin "bug" gets splattered/ Vaporizin ya brain then sayin it "doesnt matter"// (peep the wordplay) Decapitatin this fake emcee, leave ya chest like swiss cheese/ You've just recieved a merking from these here fit steez// |
Good Battle
Flow-Diss Punches-Diss Enjoyment-Diss Word PLay-Jesus Formatting(OF how you wrote your battle)-Jesus Understandable-Jesus OVerall-Tie 3-3 .... Ill firgure it out...YOu'll See In The poles....... |
Re: Diss~Play vs Rap Jesus
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read this again.. Formatting? Wtf! get out of here kid |
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I'm not hating on anyone
Looks like Jesus here doesnt have a problem.......Becuase I wasnt hating.. It was fair what I said and if you dont think so YOU should read it again |
diss won by a long shothe killed him
his wordplay punches metas all came stronger ohh yeah rapjesus ashes and judges dont rhyme at all vote honstly on this http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=91941 |
no YOU should read it again you fuckin herb
Undersandable and formatting? Your a true faggot dont ever post in my threads agian |
Diss had this one just cuz he came in smooth and kept his meter better....if "Jesus" had to put that to a beat it wouldnt be easy cuz his meter is all fucked up
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up for votes
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uppin..................................for votes with ppl over 100 posts............................................. ...................
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rap jesus i crucify u again/send u to hell when u born even tho u got no origial sin/u say u gods son but u aint makin it to heaven/u put out cheap sh*t lyk a 7-11/im enterin ur turf and ur place/rollin ur eyes in ur head so u dont see me brake ya face/put u into seizures and convulsions so u swallow u tongue/and that sh*t aint coincidence that b4 u crucified u neck is wrung
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