To All The Ladies Out There..
 

This is a quick keystyle wrote up for this girl..

This Girl Jen Is So Special To Me I Give Her A 11 Out Of 10…
With Angelic Features And Sweet Personality U’d Swear Shes From Heaven…
She’s My Lucky Number Seven.. When I’m With Her I’m So Lucky..
You Fall In Love With The Looks Then Stay For The Personality…
Make This A Reality The Way She Stands Out Where Ever She Goes…
Everyone Knows Shes Got It Going On From The Head To The Toes…
Who Knows What To Expect When We Met The AGD’s On Monday…
Da Way I Saw This Heavenly Figure Coulda Swore It Was Sunday…
One Day I Knew We Had To Go Out And I Aint Lying…
Just Check This Verse Especially Written For Jen From Ryan..
With My Sincere Spitten.. Hope It Finds Its Way Into Your Heart..
Cuz I Feel Lost When We Are Not Together And Apart..
Now The Challenge Is Keeping The Angel From Above..
Introduce You To The Frat Let Everyone Know Who I Talk Of..
Unworthy Of Your Love.. For I Am Only A Stranger To This Word..
But I Can Not Explain This Feeling That Has Occurred..
The Mixture Of Butterflies When I See Her Walk This Way..
If Only She Came And Was Mine For Just One Day..

I liked this one, but it sounds more like a poem than a flow..., people like this are lucky to have someone that cares enough about them to write rhymes and shit....
take it EZ

this is sumthin' to check out, flippin the script
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...?threadid=92211

yeah i liked the meaning and vocab was good, but you lost me on the flow, but it looks like deep shit, and if those were thre words to say it, then........aight.... pc

this DOES seem more like a poem than somethin that shud be in open mics... but anyway... some places the flow was off, but some places it was real good. The emotion was in it. nice job on that. Shit if a guy wrote something like this about me I'd be flattered.. so nice job.. i liked it.

.: Uppin :.