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Paradøx Vs. Young Smiff
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No Crew, Dick, Swayed, Bias, Hate, ect... Votes U spit first and most important, No Bullshit. Ante Up Man...lol |
Hitt his up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91314 I'll be back when yall spit
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it s anotha hot six empty out a third of tha clip
he want sum he can get burned like bad pussy on dick damn hes sick like a cancer victom fist are dogs so he run when i holla sick'em i'll counteract a pardox put him a bad spot like a pass thrown 2 tha middle of tha feild and its cought.... hurt'em |
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91823
hit this up ........................................... |
where u at homie............................................. ............
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My fault... wasn't look for you to post so soon... i was checkin out this kid that wants to know what pussy tastes like...lol
ok checkin... |
^^TAG and DoperThanYou.. you are both not very smart....1 of them is a flyweight and another is new 2 rb so how can they vote on ya battle?^wack
and ill vote on this when paradox spits |
ok check it
attention, herb clean up needed... sound the buzzard, start tha timer, lets get it on... ladies and gentlemen of rb, i'm here to explain how he's sonned... "u can't beat the unbeatable", i'm glad you have the right mindframe... i don't have to say that i'm sick, kuz it's already been exclaimed... your battling me dogg, not complimenting, for that go to the cypher... i got your ass fallowing my words like i was pide piper... ok wanted to go over, but ya know.... Votes Now Accepted |
the attention part isn't a line.....
just clearing that up...... peace................................ |
Newb Battle Like Usual not that either of you are herbs though
First off....... Punches-Tie Flow-Paradox Structure-Paradox Enjoyment-Neither Best Bar of Battle Paradox your battling me dogg, not complimenting, for that go to the cypher... i got your ass fallowing my words like i was pide piper... Overall-Paradox u guys keep elevating............................ |
Thanx... i know that was a weak ass verse, but it should do the job...lol
i was too busy laughing at that thread about "what pussy tastes like"....lol Ok, More Votes.... |
sound the buzzard, start the timer, lets get it on
ladies & gentlemen of r.b., im here 2 explain how hes sonned ______________________________________________ this was wack^ ______________________________________________ u cant beat the unbeatable, im glad u have the right mind frame i dont have 2 say that i'm sick, cuz its already been exclaimed ______________________________________________ better, but im glad u have the right mind frame dont make sense ______________________________________________ yer battling me dog, not complamenting for that go 2 the cypher i got ya ass following my words like i was pide piper? ______________________________________________ dont ever use pide piper. you dont need a comma after complamenting kinda wack but average^ ______________________________________________ ill be back ______________________________________________ |
Uppin for the 1st time
Lets get some votes............................................. ................... |
it's another hot six empty out a third of the clip
he want some, he can get burned like a bad pussy on dik _______________________________________________ this was decent, but lacks creativity, & remember 2 use commas _______________________________________________ damn hes sick like a cancer victom fist are dogs, so he run when i holla sick em _______________________________________________ decent but short, u need more wordplay _______________________________________________ i'll counteract a paradox put him a bad spot like a pass thrown 2 the middle of the field & its caught _______________________________________________ 1st line didnt make much sense^ decent, but as i said before it lackss a lot of stuff _______________________________________________ after seeing these 2 verses, which werent thought out very well ima have to say young smiff pulled it off vote/y.s. _______________________________________________ yo people with 100 posts check out my battles names vs copy>that fool was feeding and c-section said i won copy righted was banned so he dont deserve votes names vs noabuse>1-0 _______________________________________________ |
Glad he finally voted...lol, now can we get some votes here.........
don't let this be slept on........................................ |
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