WrEcKiN EyEz vs. Young Smiff
 

Rules:

5 Bars = 10 Lines Min/Max
No Counterin', Dickridin', etc. etc. etc.

Due Monday night ..

I'm done with, and sonned him, I write my puns quick,
How yal make a peach crumble? Just kick his Young Smiff,
I hung him, as yal see I just stepped on this noob,
He only spittin' tight when you see his neck on a noose,
I'm reppin' the truth, tell me how you feelin' a win?
I know Young Smiff's a fruit, but I ain't a-peelin' to him,
I'm killin' this kid, mothafuck I'll pave ya ryhmes clear,
You couldn't spit ya visionaries if you had an eyedea,
He cries fear, don't spit wack, just quit ya fartin' boy,
Ya had no punches kid, I took out ya bars like Arkenoid ..

Good Luck ..

hey yo im tha type of rapper to aim and hit wit precisian
i wreck eyes how i put 4 in ta forhead and wreck ya vision
look i got tha midas touch yall should know em
and if ya want i could punch u in tha mouth and all ya lrics'll b golden
i go for tha throat dis niggas a joke and i aint laughfin
i'll send a round of appluase 2 his block i aint in 2 little clappin
ima a grown ass man i dont play wit deeze boys it like im old
you couldn't spit sick if u had a tha flew and a cold
fce ha facts homie u will neva b tight
even if u had jiggas freesyles and nas's 1 mic ..... 1

that 9th lines supposed to say face tha facts............................................. ...............
....... Yes sir that was a decent battle

Uppin' for votes .. Good luck .................................................. .................................................. ...................

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Opener: Young
Closer: Tie
Punches: Tue
Personals: Wreck
Flow: Wreck
Win: Wreck
Can yall critique this battle since yall can't vote yet http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92298

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damn... this was pretty good guys

but i think this goes to Wreck (i like the name too) i think he took it more cause of flow... both punches were about even... wreck had a few good ones, young had a few good ones... wreck had the better flow so my vote goes to him

vote wreck

Wack Ass Battle Both Elevate Please But After This Feedback Vote For My Two Battles Please So But Neways Wreckin Got This No Doubt He Came Nicer I Liked His Flow No Nice Punches Or Metas Or Personals But His Overall Verse Was Nicer Both Of Ya Elevate~1

opener:smiff
closer:tie
wordplay:tie
structure:[/Btie]
[B]punches:wrekin
overall:wrekin

nice battle, jus keep elevatin



plz vote honestly on this!!!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...4279#post914279

Good battle bro .. You wanna end it now or keep the votes goin'? Either way it's coo wit me but everything gets slept on ..

might as well end it................................................ .................................................. .....................................good battle

METAPHORES - neither
VOCABULARY - neither
PUNCHLINES - tie
STRUCTURE - WrEcKiN EyEz
CREATIVITY - WrEcKiN EyEz
PERSONALS - WrEcKiN EyEz
OPENING - Young Smiff
CLOSING - tie
MULTIES - neither
FLOW - WrEcKiN EyEz

OVERALL - WrEcKiN EyEz

Return the favor:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93392

for over all i think wreck took this battle

no doubt he had the better flow

both need elevation as explained already

i think young could of done alot bettter thought

vote:wrec