what do u think of this the title is ARE YOU REALLY DIFFERENT
 

you all strive to be different
therefor you all conform
normalcy is no longer
in essence a norm
you say you are just being yourself
but by who is yourself defined?
in your fight for difference you lost your true mind
your thoughts perversed by media
controled by punk rock
that is the way u define yourself
you are not different or even controled by yourself
you were lost for the want of being noticed
so u conformed to the trend of difference

KID DONOVAN

reply to other drops before you post your own... and then you'll get some feedback.

^read the rules, ayo Donovan man this is dope just soo profound and its just so impactful, i really like this, one of the better pieces on the page imo, great drop, 1luv.

You did a good job with this one. However I think that the way you used 'you' and directed it towards someone else throws it off.
Is there a specific group your talking to or just people in general? The 'punk rock' line threw me off there.... if it is general then impact is lost through the narrative and if it is specific than it is a niave narrative.
So the concept is great and you did a pretty good job putting it together but you lack clarity and because of that, validity.

keep elevtin' bro.
.peace.