rule vs Sublime D
 

Rule, an open mic fiend, but still a fool
not realizing that he's really a tool
gushin over soem bitch with his amature lust
gettin ripped in battle, like the condom i bust
in his bitch when i impregnatd the slut
he raisin my son, but another bun in the oven
cause me an her engaged in soem more heavy lovin
posin as a veteran, but really gets sonnedd
so i break the rule, liek a con on the run
he already broke, like a record, liek the tired subjects he lectures



...damn i suck

alright i just seen this battle...wow...lets finish this...pz

Prepare for a sixth loss for i'm the sixth element
Scar your verbal tissue wit lyrics is arelavent
Sublime D couldnt be a tenth of rules equivalent
Infested wit H-I-V you winning is absolutly inimite
Hittin you with bars isn't really necasarlly needed
Rule just one word that took this win..conceeded?
No just my styles not combined with gay slurs
Sloth stealin punches from me him and her
Quick ten sec key longer then your gay cum session
Irrelavent who won this battle no second guesson

uppen for some votes............................................. ............................................

uppen to get this battle done...some votes wud be apreciated...thanks .....................................second uppen

3rd uppen...need some votes jst wonna finish this battle pz................................................ .........................................

I will vote for this after you vote on my battles below in my sig. I will vote right after you do so. Aight hommie. I already made my min up 2 LOL

OUT

-High Class a.k.a Confusion

OMG, now this was an easy picking on this battle. Rule came harder, nice rhyme scheme, good vocab, straight punches. The other guy. I cant talk to much shit, figuring my record right now. LOL But that shit was horrible, but hey where all here to elevate hommie.

Vote = RULE

OUT

-High Class a.k.a Confusion

even tho i dont have 100 posts yet (YET) i'll have in a few, i will be able to vote, rule you have my vote, you came hella lotz harder, better wordplay, better structrue,
sublime work on better wordplay and come with harder punches.

VOTE=RULE (even know it dont matter right now will in a few h0urs or tomorrow)

would you guyz please check out my battle with Explict and have an honest vote, thanz it can be found here: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94950

upprn again for some votes............................................. .....................................

Rule---------------------->Winz

Better flow, punches, vocab, evri thing really

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=94823

Hit dat up ^

rule gets my vote.. better scheme, better structure, n wordplay.. sublime.. work on your structure.. a lot.. heh.. anyway yeah rule got my vote.

Opner: Rule
Closer: Rule
Flow: Rule
Punches: Rule
Personals: Rule
Easy merkin by Rule here. Keep elevatin Sublime

METAPHORES - rule
VOCABULARY - rule
PUNCHLINES - rule
STRUCTURE - rule
CREATIVITY - rule
PERSONALS - rule
OPENING - rule
CLOSING - rule
MULTIES - neither
FLOW - rule

OVERALL – rule