25. Edicius (1-2) vs. 26. pHraNtiK (1-2)
 

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Your topic: between the sheets

Between Sheets..

U just close u'r eyes, and i will kiss ur lips,
there will be no suprise, when i jus touch ur hips.
Like it was before just u and me,
together again u know we can be free.
So just take my hand..and better give it in,
we start over again with a perfect begin.
But this is just a dream it will be never the same,
i fucked it all up , now im just filled with pain.
Still i will never stop, continue till i drop,
when theres is nothing left, with my head to the floor,
realizin that, i cant get back what i adore.
So just put a stop to that search for happyness,
cuz it is just no good only pain nothing less.
Couldnt tell u why i feld o so alone,
why there is not a place thats close to call my home.
And than we got my life of wich im feelin shame,
but who can help, when im the one to blame.
But still i found, u came into my life,
i wished i wasnt a prick than now u be my wife.
But i'm jus made to fail, and this proves it again,
im not made for joy i'm only good for sin.
So now i'm fallin apart the puzzle cant be fixed,
and the feelings fear, & pain will be further mixed.
So now im all alone, were can i feel myself free?,
now that ur no more here, now theres no u and me.
So no im back in search, were can i find it now,
but it was oh so close i realised it wow.
That thing ive'd searched so hard to satisfy my needs,
is in bed my eyes closed between sheets ..

So i can dream ...of how its ment to be...

Words lay between the sheets, waiting to reproduce
I insert ink into the mix -- and watch my pen seduce
The sheet of paper is growing full, another page or 2
I’m always just fucking with words that I write for you.
I’ll insist to assist you; I’ll be forever looking to please.
Let me take you by the hand; and lead the way w/ ease.
In debt to you and your infinite love, I’ll soon find a way
So w/ words between the sheets, my debt I do repay.
A ballad for you, a song to be sung… a letter I do write.
For you to spend time with me, I’ll meet w/ you tonight.
I’ll touch you emotionally and I’ll leave you feeling safe.
Then you can invite me in, just cause it is getting late.
We can talk and laugh, then, I’ll kiss your soft pink lips.
My hands move very slowly, I place them upon your hips.
Winning your heart, like I always do -- never suffer defeat.
Go to bed, & awake so soon, w/ us both between the sheets.

I am Jesus Christ.

hmmm two very similar pieces...really enjoyed both pieces but im going to give this to 'tik...i enjoyed his use of words and over all structure more..

vote=phrantik