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Don-L 11-16-03 07:10 PM

Don~L - You & Me
 
Someone Else Did Their Song To This Same Beat.. But Let's Not Dwell On Technicalities.. LOL... Just Give Some Feedback... True Story... About The Same Shorty I'm Wit Right Now...

Lo-Fi:

http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...?ID=676727&q=Lo

Hi-Fi:

http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...?ID=676727&q=Hi



Aight... Uppin' For Feedback...

Tr0ublesome 11-16-03 07:14 PM

aight......Yah song iz ehhhhh.....Itz st8 and all, quality iz horrible....
and nah, my version of thiz iz better....yah delivery iz weaker, and so iz the emotion.....but nice lyricz.....keep it up

PostMan 11-16-03 08:01 PM

umm... this is kinda wack. for one vocals are to loud. and one you rap to low. i use to do that. you hear other tracks and it sound like they rappin mellow... nah nigga you gotta yell and rap like its a demon in front of you.

Don-L 11-17-03 09:26 AM

THANK YOU!... That's Gotta Be Some Of The BEST Feedback I've Ever Gotten... Nigga's Just Didn't Tell Ya What Was Wrong... But They Told You What To Do To Make It Better... Imma Re-Record This... ANYTHING Else Y'all Got To Say... Bring It... I'm 15, Just Starting This Shit Out, Tryna Get Serious... Got The Lyrics... Got The Flow... I Just Gotta Know How To Make All This Audio Shit Work Together... To Put Muh Shit On Tracks... But Chea... Even If You Think It's Wack...

I'M STYLL UPPIN'... CRITICISM WELCOME!...


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