im new n need help!!! ill rite some shit n tell me how ot make it better!!!!
 

ive been told a million times im wak aaihgt. i fukin no this, thats why im in this godam W.E.C tryna get help. so cna i plz get some.



i leave u dead//
after da chainsaw razor edge, rips thro ya neck//

im hopin i can keep up to this pace, n go far//
be on stage, n leave this game a star//

i need a tutor or sumtin like dat//
i dun wanna quit, willing to fite bak//

wether i get hated on 1 ,2 ,3 times in a day//
yo.. im just a youngster that has alot ta say//

thats wen me n ma pen n paper come to an understanding//
piss me off, u gonna have a bad day like the airport wen a plane has a bad landing//

or flies into sumtin its not supposed to, thats y the towers aint fukin standing//
i may be new, but i give mc's a good handling//

wether u say im, wack or not//
im not gonna stop, till ma rymes are so raw, they rawt//

^ Post it in the "Open Mic" forum, they'll tell you how to get better in there when they reply. .

well its just too basic...post that in open mic like cam said, but you should think about reading some books because it seems as if ure vocabulary is very limited

read a lot of battles but not in frontlines read the LLL battles and read battles from the Vets on this site

always battle people better than you and always give a good effort

thganx alot man ya both helped!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!