Clap It Up
 

sit back and watch a lil kid/
take da advice of a younger and smarter kid/
in school is where i stay at/
in da hallway is where i get da soul clap/
then i rhyme 2 it right in front of da teacher/
she kno in da rap game im da teacher/
watch em clap there hands 2 a beat/
imma rhyme 2 it like i was in da street/
now i got a even bigger crowd/
clappin there hands even louder now/
commin up wit some hott spits/
twice da profit/
hand back stand back/jus give me da clap/

clap it up 4 da kids who knew me/
watch da crowd clap there hands in unity/
stack it up and clap it up/
cuz dois kid goin rap it up/

wat u thought rapping was a game/
nah rapping was my middle name/
kinda like god and jesus/
rap is da god and im his jesus/
tell da whole word dat im da best/
ppl turn against me cuz i put em 2 rest/
neva stopping in da hallway still/
bell rung we still in da hallway still/
still clapping 2 a beat u kno/
clap it up move yo feet u kno

this needs some work.... your flow was good and it stayed consistent... but the topic of "im ill" is played heaps.... and u need to up your vocab and use some advanced rhyming skills like multis, metaphors, wordplay... oh and.... please please PLEASE dont rhyme a bar with the exact same word

kinda like god and jesus/
rap is da god and im his jesus/

neva stopping in da hallway still/
bell rung we still in da hallway still/

then i rhyme 2 it right in front of da teacher/
she kno in da rap game im da teacher

^ that is lame ^

ite i got u

Well...

Betta Structure Den Ur Otha Piece...

Good Concept...

But A Lil Basic...

Work On Gettin A Lil Deeper By Extending That Vocab...

-P