Who Am I: featuring TheEnd
 

This is a song that comes from the heart. End Helped out with this
Its me...he does the hook...me again....End drops a verse and
finishes it with the hook.





*and i'm no DZK or even close to him...just startin out wit this ;)*




http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/nicknamemusic.htm

^appreciate it...the reverb i added kinda drowned out the sound

Yeah you real drowned out. Flows OK, voice not really feelin the whole delivery on this track (again just a feelin i get on drops), i like the lil' hype parts though. Lyrics is real nice, i'm feelin the lyrics. i probably could get a better feel of this cut with better sound quality, but you elevatin though, i see you workin' at this shit, don't stop.

The End-not feelin that drop, voice sounds week (not week like horrible i mean week in the literal sense, no real emphasis), lyrics was cool though.

i would never bump this but i think you're improving and gettin better however this is worse than your last battle drop, i know it's a change of pace song but you'll get better. stay up. 1

i used this beat b4... lol.. my track was like 100 times better than this... i'm-a re-post it jus' 4 y'all to peep...

you got an' a'ight flow, but yea, you really drown'd out, the hook is a'ight... 2nd verse has alot more mic presence... better flow, i agree wit bliss 'bout the little energitic parts, those are kinda hype... hook is kinda catchy... i like end's flow better, not as much punch in it as 13th has, but flow an' lyrics was good...

i'm-a come back with a link to the song i did to this beat... 'cause it'a a pretty dope tracks... 1

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92585
^ this one's the one i did on the same beat.. peep it if u want drop some feedback...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92245
^this sum new shit...

drop feedback on atleast 1... peace

umm. reverb is um yea. another labtec mic. yall gotta get some equipment... but anyways flow is coo 13th. i see elevation. you seem not sure of your flow at some parts. lyrics coo. hook pretty bad.... end you got more elevatin to do. although not that bad.. you need to learn how to use graphic equalizer for a better mix. pz.

appreciate the comments u guys....and i'll peep yallz work...

^^^

Fucker... posting this...

You know what I mean

^^^
Nevermind

Disregard that