Lyrical Demons
 

This is an old track ... The first one I did on Cool Edit ... LoL ... It's to Canibus' 2000 B.C. beat ... Im 3rd Verse ... My boy Genocide is 1st ... My boy T Dolo is 2nd ... He was in our group but not nemore ... Blah ... Let me get some feedback ...

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/5/mentill.htm

audo now huh? i sense a collaboration in the near future...

anyway, lets get down to business...

first guy...his verse was solid, not a bad rhyme scheme. some adibs were off. volume is good, but it faded a few times. he stayed on beat pretty well, he has a nice flow.

second dude...he needs to show more emotion..oh wait, he's not with you, there's no need to comment on him..

third (you)...you have a sick voice..solid ass verse. flow is perfect. show more emoiton asshole, lol. you can't spit on a canibus beat like this! you have to get pissed at the mic dogg. lol.

the quality of the track it's self was nice, real nice, worth the listen. the qualit yof the vocals was a bit poo poo, but i can help you with that. this was a dope track. with better quality and more meotion, i could've been sickening.

7/10

Nice shit fam.



-quality over quantity-

listenin'...beat is a lil' low, needs to be brought up. flow is a lil off at times on first verse...delivery is cool though...lyrics is OK..

2nd verse: second cat is not that tight to me, bland and blah, lyrics weak and mic presence not really there...

3rd verse: way too low with the sound on the mic...better flow with this cat and better lyrics, still just ok...

Overall-not too tight to me=ii mics

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