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BIGjoke 11-17-03 09:35 PM

weave it dont smoke it...
 
Yo
Its like Im sittin in a meeting thats against marijuana
when im gone, high ass hell, right now off dat ganja
so niccas think that I'm vulnerable, gon' head attack me
I gotta armada of vocab and metas to back me
you wont get any slack like professional tight ropes
They wont hurt physically but they'll fight all of yor hopes
im a man wit many coats each a convenient market
to effectivly distribute fufilling wieght to appartments
or you can get like slugs to yo face like swimmin in swamps
or get fucked and beat down sorta like primitive romps

lol
feedback

Gene Pool 11-17-03 10:04 PM

aigh't. good structure, some ok multi's and flow, some alright vocab, lacked some wordplay and it was a pretty basic rhyme scheme but good job for one of ur first drops keep it up bro. peace. and don't forget to post 3 open mics that u left feedback on.


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