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Infinite Skillz vs. set-ignorance (the real 1)
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no hate/dr/crew votes no feedin no bitin no recyclin u drop first good luck |
Heavy weight champ, you’d have better luck being a bitch// I burn like a lamp, try turning me off, without a switch// I’ll boil you over, like a kettle of water// You thought this was gunna be simple? This is a mass slaughter//
Envy skills was lucky when it came to the crunch// Hope you don’t pay no pussy’s to vote you’re shit, ‘punk’// My punch-lines will leave you lyrically inclined// I’ll hang your body, with a residue, that will make you ‘resigned’// Feel the full-throttle of this dominated attack// I’ll rip out your spine n whip you on your own back// like a dominatrix with spare-time here the spine whip tail ‘smack’ // I show no remorse when I’m on top of a battle// I’ll swallow you up, like a wolf on sheep cattle// so with this I’ll conceal you, no point in you spitting, no1 wud feel you// |
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feelin it man u held it down but infinite is mad propa letsee if u can get em ill give my prop vote when yall both spit http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91941 need honest votes on dat so we can wrap it up |
Sorry............................................. ..............had a phone call.............................................. ......I'll drop in a few............................................... 1
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Give me 10 more minutes..................................writer's block....................................1
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It's ova wit:
U envy and study my skillz steady lookin for flawz/ Here's some help, usin them against u is a start// I'm dope, I got this kid tryna taste my lines/ My punches will decapitate u, now ur ahead of ur time// This slut likes dick-rydin, so I'ma let u down wit ease/ U couldn't come nice if ur verse wuz filled wit these :D// I'ma swat this fly and leave on 'em on on the brink of death/ Ur ignorance wuz set, nothin but this link is left.... [URL=http://www-personal.umich.edu/~eddiev/Images/poo.jpg[/URL] // |
Here's the real verse:
It's ova wit: U envy and study my skillz steady lookin for flawz/ Here's some help, usin them against u is a start// I'm dope, I got this kid tryna taste my lines/ My punches will decapitate u, now ur ahead of ur time// This slut likes dick-rydin, so I'ma let u down wit ease/ U couldn't come nice if ur verse wuz filled wit these :D// I'ma swat this fly and leave on 'em on on the brink of death/ Ur ignorance wuz set, nothin but this link is left.... http://www-personal.umich.edu/~eddiev/Images/poo.jpg// |
Here's the real verse wit workin link:
It's ova wit: U envy and study my skillz steady lookin for flawz/ Here's some help, usin them against u is a start// I'm dope, I got this kid tryna taste my lines/ My punches will decapitate u, now ur ahead of ur time// This slut likes dick-rydin, so I'ma let u down wit ease/ U couldn't come nice if ur verse wuz filled wit these :D// I'ma swat this fly and leave on 'em on on the brink of death/ Ur ignorance wuz set, nothin but this link is left.... http://www-personal.umich.edu/~eddiev/Images/poo.jpg // |
Disregard my first 2 verses..........................................th ey were fuck ups.....................................I messed up the links.......................................1
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WELL I DONT KNOW I THINK SET TOOK DIS ONE I LIKED DA PUNCHES N INFINITE SOUNDED KINDA BASIC, I KNOW INFINITE IS DOPE FROM OTHA BATTLES THAT IVE SEEN, BUT SET TOOK DIS ONE WIT BETTA PUNCHES...,.......MAYBE I SHOULD CHECC OUT DAT LINK TO SEE WHAT IT IS
DIS IS JUS A PROP VOTE I CANT POLL VOTE YET http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91941 NEED SUM HONEST VOTES, GOOD LOOKIN OUT |
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actually this battle wasnt battle
Set ig norance u came out aite..nerbishly tho Skillz took this cuz his srtucture of verse was better he had personals an punches an good wordplay,,,,more experianced.. V-set |
Uppin for votes (2)............................................... .......don't sleep on this.............................................. ...........votes r important......................................... ................1
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nice battle..here's the breakdown:
structure-infinite...fix yours up set punches-tie..but that one line with the smiley face in infinites was tight..lmao..propz flow-infinite...need some work set complexity-set took that everything else was a tie if i recall..lol vote-infinite props to both...set..jus fix up ur structure and flow and you should do way better peACE |
oh yea...ps...inifinite..you have just been added
to the RHYME REAPERS roster if you don't mind... stay tight........elevate to the fullest~ peACE |
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