N LitEnd VS Bribeone1
 

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Check In Due: Wednesday 11-19-03
Verses Due: Friday 11-21-03


Good Luck & Give A Fuck Or I Will Fuck You Up!!!!!!!!

Will give a fuck.

Hi Bribe..

I Will Match You..

Good Luck..

I punch heads off, so u come to me seeking en light ment.
receive me with an open mouth, and its not cause u are frightened.
ya pulse is heightened, cause bribes' increasing ya blood flow.
I'm why ure face hurts, dragging u head first through the mud slow.
a poor soul, destined to be a no body forever
flirt cause u love my wize ass, and its not cause I am clever.
I'll shoot at the whites of ya eyes when they come into view
I'll toy with this kid more than once, like a jackson dejavu
right on cue witt no remorse i make a cut at the scene.
Leave u swimming witt fishes,. so your aquatic talent could be seen.

“Fuck A Bribe”, Everytime That’s Mentioned B Is There Ready And Waitin
Misundastood Child, Bribes Scared Of Confrontation <--- He’s Already Faintin!
I Spit Abrasive Scars…U Put Ya Heart In The Game, Here’s A Fact: Look,
U Got Less Chance Of Getting Signed Than A Retarded Kids Yearbook!!
The Doubts Gone…And You Know The Shadow Is Lurkin In Front Of Bribe!
Left Heads Turned Like The Tide…While I Bribe one & 1 To Run And Hide!!
NoW bRiBe, WrItE LiKe ThIs, Coz Its Played & A Bitch To Read, Like Ya Verse!
Here’s A Quick Question...”Ya Looks…Or Ya Skills…Tell Me Whats Worse?!”
Basically Bribe, You Cant Escape This Coz The Win Is In My Eye Sight
And If Ya Wonderin Why This Verse Is A Link…
…Coz When It Comes To It…Everything Of Mine Is A High Light!!

(Put The Cursor On My Verse Hoe’s)

I punch heads off, so u come to me seeking en light ment.
receive me with an open mouth, and its not cause u are frightened.

^1st punch blah, 2nd punch was funny but could have been worded better.

ya pulse is heightened, cause bribes' increasing ya blood flow.
I'm why ure face hurts, dragging u head first through the mud slow.

^Weak punch.

a poor soul, destined to be a no body forever
flirt cause u love my wize ass, and its not cause I am clever.

^Second line blah, but I liked the first, lol.

I'll shoot at the whites of ya eyes when they come into view
I'll toy with this kid more than once, like a jackson dejavu

^1st line was eh...second line was poorly worded.

right on cue witt no remorse i make a cut at the scene.
Leave u swimming witt fishes,. so your aquatic talent could be seen.

^1st line had good wordplay, weak punch. 2nd was blah. Poor closer.

“Fuck A Bribe”, Everytime That’s Mentioned B Is There Ready And Waitin
Misundastood Child, Bribes Scared Of Confrontation <--- He’s Already Faintin!

^1st line was kinda okay...good flow in second line...

I Spit Abrasive Scars…U Put Ya Heart In The Game, Here’s A Fact: Look,
U Got Less Chance Of Getting Signed Than A Retarded Kids Yearbook!!

^lol

The Doubts Gone…And You Know The Shadow Is Lurkin In Front Of Bribe!
Left Heads Turned Like The Tide…While I Bribe one & 1 To Run And Hide!!

^okay

NoW bRiBe, WrItE LiKe ThIs, Coz Its Played & A Bitch To Read, Like Ya Verse!
Here’s A Quick Question...”Ya Looks…Or Ya Skills…Tell Me Whats Worse?!”

^okay..

Basically Bribe, You Cant Escape This Coz The Win Is In My Eye Sight
And If Ya Wonderin Why This Verse Is A Link…
…Coz When It Comes To It…Everything Of Mine Is A High Light!!

^Weak closer...last line was same as Token's...you had to create something just to make it work...blah.

Close battle. N definitely took the flow...there's no doubt about that. Wordplay was pretty even...Bribe's was more effective if you ask me. Punches..I'm gonna have to go with N on the punches. Not by much though... If Bribe could word his lines better, he could be a dangerous opponent. Decent battle..

Vote ~ N

Bribe Had Too Many "Ehhh Nearly" Lines...Some Punches Were Weak And Some Were Dope...But They Needed Re-Wording...

~N Came With Some Funny Ass Disses...Decent Flow...But The Link Thing Was Kinda Gay..Didnt Feel That At All...

Stand Out Lines From Bribe:
a poor soul, destined to be a no body forever
I'll toy with this kid more than once, like a jackson dejavu

Stand Out Lines From ~N:
U Got Less Chance Of Getting Signed Than A Retarded Kids Yearbook!!
“Fuck A Bribe”, Everytime That’s Mentioned B Is There Ready And Waitin
Misundastood Child, Bribes Scared Of Confrontation <--- He’s Already Faintin!

Pretty Close Battle...Like Leth Said..N Took Flow...

But Overall My Vote Goes To ~N Because I Felt His Punches A Bit More...Bribe Has Some Killer Puns That Could've Killed ~N But They Were Poorly Worded...So I Vote For ~N

Vote-~N...

I dropped like shit..
and I'm honestly ashamed to lose to this kid.
that highlighted shit was just ehh dumb?..

Blah..

2-0 Me..

Up..

Bribe I Got To Go W/ NLitEnd On This One... I Wasnt Feeling Your
Verse Man... You COuld Have Dropped ALOT Better.... N's Was
Decent Enough To Win.... Even Though The Link Think Was Corny

Vote N

Really not feelin it bribe, you know you got more than that
N your verse was a bit blah.....but had a couple of aigh lines
Vote goes to N.

N LitEnd Wins
Bribe Loses

Battle Closed