Rap~Jesus vs kaos theory
 

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first to 5 votes, but if 3-0 Ko
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peace

My Verse:
Im not exagerating when i say ure lack intelligence/
Ure da dumbest MC, ur vocabulary is lame ur raps lack relavance//

To prove my point u accepted a callout which u surely not conquer/
I'll disfigure ur reputation, diminish ur rap career then u'll defenitely go bonkers//

Stupidity runs in ur family and i guessed it has reaches ur generation/
I will extinct ur kind of specie so b4 u battle me u should take in some consideration//

My intention in this masterpiece was to make a fake gangsta deceased/
I'll crush ur brains and put a stake through ur heart then u'll rest in peace//

Ure a termite in this game but ima kind of wood u cant destroy/
Ur lurics are borin while mine cuz more excitement than when ppl watch playboy//

Gd luck

peace

watch me destroy your beginning and leave you wit a cracked-thesis/
rap-jesus?? fuck around and you'll get snapped-to-peices... you fudgepack-feices//
fuck a peace-maker.... wit tha force of tha devel i'll beat-this-hater/
you couldnt be in lyrical fitness if u looked like tha beast-on-ur-avater//
listen..i'll make this fly-weight... mi-grate to tha south so he can die-late/
WARNING.. my lyrics will dia-late ya crossed iris till ya eyes-straight//
hit you in tha noggin... that'll quit ya talking.. and wish you never logged-in/
paralize ya legs so you're a dead man rolling... fuck a dead man walking//
kid..you're spits couldnt be fresh... if your saliva was listerine/
face it....this bitch is so much of a herb.. his piss-is-green//

upping for those votes............................................. .................................................. .............
nice battle dawg

peace

Rap Jesus won this one with better punches and better rhyme scheme...

Kaos...

How ya gonna rhyme "hater/avatar"?

I'll give ya this, ya took the best line in the battle...

"Hit ya in the noggin, that'll quit ya talking, you wish ya never loged in...
Paralyze ya legs so ya a dead man rolling, fuck a dead man walking"

Really, that's the only thing that moved me.

On the other side...

Never use childish herbish words like "bonkers" , especially as ya rhyme scheme.

Vocab, punches, and a few multi's win this for Jesus...

Hit me back...

Born vs. 007

yeah you too.........good battle...uppin.................................... ...........1111111111111111111111111

i beg to differ from born. i think that kaos theory came better. both need at least a lil elevation, but kaos was plain more enjoyable. rap jesus was too simple, better than a horrible noob herb but still too simple..u need more wordplay and all that. vote=kaos

yo could you please hit this up with an honest vote. thanks dogg...http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/usercp.php?

oops, lmao, DONT CLICK THAT...the link is right here...

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...?threadid=91956

upping those votes its 1-1, plz vote.............................................. ...................


peace

G?D
Koas's verse was funny as shit and the multis were off the fuckin hook
but enough about that bitch

rap-jesus you had an ok verse with average punches
but this battle was like mike tyson vs pee-wee-herman

Sorry
my vote Kaos

Aight, here's tha breakdown:

Rap jesus


Im not exagerating when i say ure lack intelligence/
Ure da dumbest MC, ur vocabulary is lame ur raps lack relavance//
^^WEAK OPENER, NO PUNCH AT ALL 2/10
To prove my point u accepted a callout which u surely not conquer/
I'll disfigure ur reputation, diminish ur rap career then u'll defenitely go bonkers//
^^WEAK PUNCH 4/10
Stupidity runs in ur family and i guessed it has reaches ur generation/
I will extinct ur kind of specie so b4 u battle me u should take in some consideration//
^^^GRAMMATICALLY INCORRECT, WEAK PUNCH 4/10
My intention in this masterpiece was to make a fake gangsta deceased/
I'll crush ur brains and put a stake through ur heart then u'll rest in peace//
^^^WEAK PUNCH 4/10
Ure a termite in this game but ima kind of wood u cant destroy/
Ur lurics are borin while mine cuz more excitement than when ppl watch playboy//
^^I'M NOT EXCITED.... 3/10

TOTAL: 17/50 (34%)


KAOS THEORY

watch me destroy your beginning and leave you wit a cracked-thesis/
rap-jesus?? fuck around and you'll get snapped-to-peices... you fudgepack-feices//
^^^RHYME SCHEME IS GOOD, NO REAL PUNCH THOUGH 4/10
fuck a peace-maker.... wit tha force of tha devel i'll beat-this-hater/
you couldnt be in lyrical fitness if u looked like tha beast-on-ur-avater//
^^DON'T RHYME, WEAK PUNCH 4/10
listen..i'll make this fly-weight... mi-grate to tha south so he can die-late/
WARNING.. my lyrics will dia-late ya crossed iris till ya eyes-straight//
^^NICE RHYME SCHEME, DECENT PUNCH 5/10
hit you in tha noggin... that'll quit ya talking.. and wish you never logged-in/
paralize ya legs so you're a dead man rolling... fuck a dead man walking//
^^^NICE, BEST PUNCH IN BATTLE 7/10
kid..you're spits couldnt be fresh... if your saliva was listerine/
face it....this bitch is so much of a herb.. his piss-is-green//
^^^OK CLOSER 5/10

TOTAL: 25/50 (50%)

WIN GOES TO KAOS

hit up the battles in my sig

peace

upping for more votes 1-3 in favour of koas.............................................. .................

peace

yup..this battle aws plain.......
breakdown=
punches=rap
sustainment=rap
flow=rap
creativity=kaos
metas=kaos
enjoyment=rap
overall=rap

MAKE SURE YA HIT THIS UP OR I'LL KEEP BUGGIN
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91806

ok will do.......... 3-2 in favour of koas still need more votes............................................. ......................

peace