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keystyles....

yo scratch and sniff the craftless shit
of this laughin bitch who rips quick limitless
thats me, what significance is worth this
all ideas are skeptical, theories pertanent?
sickness overpowers sour by the hour
the divine fatality of reality lion coward
some emcees breath stanzas like cigarettes
i inhale them and absorb like fuels in cool jets
askin her yet? hesitatin like hamlet
i slam it, like seven two to the basket
the perils of morals horrible limits infinite
criminals done sins by inhalin little hits
is this fit? survival of them the fittest
judged by God or science, who is the realist critic
intoxicated by 8 ounces of poison drink
fucked up and a mind alter is one of many human instincts
why do we love the glove pulled over our faces
just to have fun? thats still escapin to other places
i side with it like hypocrite and swim in my own critisizms
if the most opposed jokes, still issue individualism?
its a sinical ritual of human nature
mind vs. body vs. escapin normal nomenclature
who can rise above transcend like thoreau did
without findin themselves 6 feet deep eroded
i rip up whats holy and combine it with what i believe in
but its nothin but flame of hypothesis to breathe in
looks can be decievin, but so can personalities
identity is zero cuz manners submit to formalities
and honesty is worthless so much that it hurts him
burns like the 3rd burn or what we all are yearnin
death is like life, we dont what the fuck it is
but whos business is it to know? all we do is exist

no direct subject, just spillin my mind i dont know

how bout some feedback??