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Aragorn vs Rhymes
12 lines (not 10)
blind spit, do it quick No b/s explain votes. check in this is my check in |
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I'ma P.I.M.P,tryin to sell Aragorn to Gay porn/
They still want less for him cuz his ass is torn/ Full throttle, hit you with every line to came make you run// Durin the last few lines this homo tried to hit on me (click) Pussy run// Aim at you directly to you, shit made you cry in Rap battle/ I'm ridin you like your fagg's do on weekends with cattle/ Your fukin wid a soldeir bitch I aint your father/ Fucked your muther for a doller and your gay father didn't even bother/ |
A quick lesson for the newbie... I see he got heart
Stuck my fingers in his chest and ripped his ribcage apart His heart pump Kool-Aid... I know he's a bitch A quick ventricle slit... And I took me a sip But I spit your blood out cause the mixture had too much sugar:spit: Guess that explains why you past out when I extended the challenge to ya Your feint of heart, light in the ass, this was a bad step Scare you to death, blow you down with my breath, fall to a fast death 0 and 1?.... why you try to step to me son? Your birth's the reason why your pop's had a vasectomy done Rhymes for a name?... I wish these fucking kids get a clue I outclassed you... that's why i never battle a noob:noob: |
nice verse let them votes comin
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Open- rhymes (shit was nasty)
Metas - aragon Creavitity - tie Personals - aragon Flow - tie Finish - aragon Abuse - tie vote = aragon, too much fag shit rhymes...not enough wordplay. keep elevatin My Battles: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92417 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92568 |
vote>>aragorn
his verse had better punchlines. it was very evident he has the better verse............................................. ................................nigga |
Opener: Rhymes
Closer: Tie Flow: Rhymes Punches: Ara Personals: Ara Win: Aragorn Nice battle Rhymes, I see much elevation Hit this up please http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92779 |
i think aragorn got this he came with harder more advanced punches and used fucking emoticons besides...lmao rhymes your verse was okay but nothin too hot in the punch category.
sorry still trying to get to a hundred posts. it takes too damn long. |
yo thanx for the votes
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Open- rhymes
Metas - aragon Creavitity - tie Personals - aragon Flow - tie Finish - aragon Abuse - ti |
Aragorn had way better wordplay
vocab i understood it , rhymes gotta elevate or leave no hate********************************************** * ************************************************** *** |
aragorn toook this no doubt wordplay and lines and flow was hotter rhymes verse was aite but just didn't feel it for some reason overall vote=aragorn
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Tha Basics:
Flow- Rhymes Punches - Aragorn Personals - Neither Originality - Aragorn Elementary Shit: Multis - Neither Meta4s - Aragorn Structure - Rhymes Wordplay - Aragorn Vote = Aragorn Thas the deal... Peep these: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91793 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90461 . ... ..... ... . |
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