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Quelude 11-18-03 11:02 PM

Aragorn vs Rhymes
 
12 lines (not 10)
blind spit, do it quick
No b/s
explain votes.
check in
this is my check in

Rhymes 11-18-03 11:04 PM

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Rhymes 11-18-03 11:30 PM

I'ma P.I.M.P,tryin to sell Aragorn to Gay porn/
They still want less for him cuz his ass is torn/

Full throttle, hit you with every line to came make you run//
Durin the last few lines this homo tried to hit on me (click) Pussy run//

Aim at you directly to you, shit made you cry in Rap battle/
I'm ridin you like your fagg's do on weekends with cattle/

Your fukin wid a soldeir bitch I aint your father/
Fucked your muther for a doller and your gay father didn't even bother/

Quelude 11-18-03 11:31 PM

A quick lesson for the newbie... I see he got heart
Stuck my fingers in his chest and ripped his ribcage apart
His heart pump Kool-Aid... I know he's a bitch
A quick ventricle slit... And I took me a sip
But I spit your blood out cause the mixture had too much sugar:spit:
Guess that explains why you past out when I extended the challenge to ya
Your feint of heart, light in the ass, this was a bad step
Scare you to death, blow you down with my breath, fall to a fast death
0 and 1?.... why you try to step to me son?
Your birth's the reason why your pop's had a vasectomy done
Rhymes for a name?... I wish these fucking kids get a clue
I outclassed you... that's why i never battle a noob:noob:

Rhymes 11-18-03 11:34 PM

nice verse let them votes comin






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Dek81 11-18-03 11:54 PM

Open- rhymes (shit was nasty)
Metas - aragon
Creavitity - tie
Personals - aragon
Flow - tie
Finish - aragon
Abuse - tie

vote = aragon, too much fag shit rhymes...not enough wordplay. keep elevatin

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Pres KillZ 11-19-03 12:00 AM

vote>>aragorn
his verse had better punchlines. it was very evident he has the better verse............................................. ................................nigga

TAG 11-19-03 12:08 AM

Opener: Rhymes
Closer: Tie
Flow: Rhymes
Punches: Ara
Personals: Ara
Win: Aragorn
Nice battle Rhymes, I see much elevation
Hit this up please http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92779

_ÑÒÀßÙSÈ_ 11-19-03 12:33 AM

i think aragorn got this he came with harder more advanced punches and used fucking emoticons besides...lmao rhymes your verse was okay but nothin too hot in the punch category.

sorry still trying to get to a hundred posts.
it takes too damn long.

Rhymes 11-19-03 02:57 PM

yo thanx for the votes

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more votes

Explict 11-19-03 03:00 PM

Open- rhymes
Metas - aragon
Creavitity - tie
Personals - aragon
Flow - tie
Finish - aragon
Abuse - ti

Nitemarre 11-19-03 03:07 PM

Aragorn had way better wordplay

vocab

i understood it , rhymes gotta elevate or leave

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Yu Bin SunD 11-19-03 03:13 PM

aragorn toook this no doubt wordplay and lines and flow was hotter rhymes verse was aite but just didn't feel it for some reason overall vote=aragorn

Casual 11-19-03 03:13 PM

Tha Basics:
Flow- Rhymes
Punches - Aragorn
Personals - Neither
Originality - Aragorn

Elementary Shit:
Multis - Neither
Meta4s - Aragorn
Structure - Rhymes
Wordplay - Aragorn


Vote = Aragorn


Thas the deal...


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