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Game vs Poetictendenceez *real*
^^^my fault...pressed submit too quick
alright boi...verses due in 30 min...no dickrydn votes...no hate votes....5 bars you say? OK! PEACE...make sure you check in....this is my check in |
Aight this the check in for me................................................ .................................................. .................................................. ....................
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(Battle Verse)
Look, Who got a napkin yo? - cause I'm a wipe the Floor with this bastard, I special - ize in removals - of Garbage on - "RapBattles"/ DOT COM, And Game Ladin bought to smash and crash this Plain, Poetic Hot's a pipe dream Ya career - just CLOGGIN my drain/ so hit the sewer b*tch...........................and Splinter wants his freestyles back/ here's the special Award dunn, you not good enuff - for wack/ Stick with the side hobby- ya videos slob gumming on dick, that wasn't Paris Hilton Fuckin - that was homeboy with a wig/ Ugly Blonde Bitch, - son why the fuck you testin the game? How about I blow ya thougts on ya mouse - so I can pick ya brains?/ |
don't get it twisted, we know that this "game's" already over
this nigga'd have more "luck" trying to find a four leaf clover in the winter, under a mother fuckn foot of snow than he'll ever have of beating me like i beat his hoe through his name we know that he claims to have game but like a one legged man, his game is clearly lame he's like the Atlanta Hawks, after they lost Alonzo to New Jersey their game sucked at first, but now he ain't even worthy to stand next to me, up on this lyrical stage while i spit game to your mom, and rattle her cage |
Aight son nice spit................... let's get them votes in...................
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uppin......................
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uppin (1).......post a link ya'll and i'll be sure to hit up your post as well.....PEACE....................................
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Open- game (although first line kinda conflicted. Who needs napkins would have made more sense)
Metas - none Creavitity - poetic Personals - game Flow - poetic Finish - tie Abuse - game (that wasn't Paris Hilton Fuckin - that was homeboy with a wig = nasty...lol) vote = game My Battles: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92417 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92568 |
both verses were pretty wack, but i gotta go wit game on dis one.
heres da breakdown: metas-none flow-none punches-game personals-game who had the best line-game finish-neither vote-game |
i'm uppn...but who you calln wack ? (3-4?).......whatever....up this shhhhyt
2...peace~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
ok games verse was retarded plain and simple
______________________________________________ why do even have to explain this shit ______________________________________________ weak battle but poeticteend....takes this in every catagorie ______________________________________________ vote/poetic ______________________________________________ peep it homie, least u can do is look at it ______________________________________________ http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91980 ______________________________________________ |
i would vote poetic if i could he had better flow and stronger disses.
vote on my battle with wyze sin if you can. i'll be polling soon enough. |
upping this (3)>>!!!!!~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~
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game's flow was well off, poetics was superior
both could've used more punches, but when they did poetic's hit harder overall poetic had a better structure, wiv more creativity VOTE: POETIC TENDENCEEZ i took the time, now hit this up wiv an honest vote peeps: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=89066 |
opener:poetic
closer:Tie wordplay:Game structure:poetic punches:poetic overall:poetic aiight game you need to fix your structure, and also work on your wordplay, and punches. poetic be lucky you got my vote, you only just scraped this one, you also need to keep elevatin. aaigght will both y'all peep my battle with Lm, its in my sig. aiight peace |
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