set-ignorance vs deser_eagle
 

rules

6 lines
no h/c/dr votes
u drop first
check in before you spit

Like water on metal, I make you rust, like ash’s to powder, eventually to dust
I crush my opponent like an element of sand, be an emcee? Better luck being in a boy band


I slam thou energy into the eyes of the enemy, making him surprised n un-even n un-ready
I steady my lines to the brink of there integrity and let lose like a wizard with an iller remedy


Steadily over-powering you, like the giant I am, your life is already over-due, taken by demand

Apprehensive lyrics that make you think backwards, an exclusive image that over-laps your whack words

Here’s a way to clinically finish you, let u recap what I wrote, and the publicly humiliate you// with a word of wisdom, taken into advice, for messing with me you pay a heavy price

Now here we are, where I end my sufficient zone, I’ll hand you the mic, n you can take it home// write down what you think might help you to win, n if it doesn’t help…. Your in for some discipline…

Man, hurry up n fucking drop your shit, stop fuckin cowarding away.. Pussy... naggin nigga.. Aight? Is that cool, alrite then .... Fuck sake.. Peace Holla...

yo sorry, i ain't been on since i set this up. i'm bout to spit.............................................. ...................

i asked for someone on my level and i get this "cat". he still an amateur. still "lickin nuts" and "hidin from his stats"*//
my lines are "ropes" wrap 'round ya neck and "strangle you". leave you "hangin from trees" more than "disobedient slaves"//
i'm leavin u in this battle "speechless" like i just "cut out ya vocal chords" and "put em to ya ear" so you can "hear tha stupid shit you spit"//

*=he rides niggaz dicks, and cats lick their nuts to clean themselves, and he 0-4 so he tryna hide from his record

ne votes c'mon niggaz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I don't think anyones gunna give feedback on this.. There all too busy doing otha shit.. I know it don't look 6 lines, but i think i may of got a lil confused, haha. Holla

Opener: Set
Closer: Deser
Flow: Set
Punches: Set
Personals: tie
Win Set
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6 lines so i voted on ur first six set.

Open- deser
Metas - none
Creavitity - deser
Personals - none
Flow - deser
Finish - deser
Abuse - deser

vote = deser

Set, u got me confused, how does dust rhyme wit band, demand rhyme wit words..etc?

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Set, u got me confused, how does dust rhyme wit band, demand rhyme wit words..etc?

Dude, re-read the line agen.. Alrite.. I think u got yourself confused.. Haha. Holla Peace

SEt ya structure is all Fucked up man
you look like you got some potential u just need to elvate man

Deser -----u need to grab a dictionary and start expandin ya vocab
if i were to guess how old you were by this stuff you write id say like 8
another MC^^^^6who needs to elevate


Vote +++++++++++Set ------for his somewhat unstructured but weak punches

Aight, uppin.. Come on.. Haha.. I'm gettin tired. I've already lost a battle again from the tiredness i put myself under.. Keep the votes comin.. Peace

yo c'mon people quit sleepin on dis shit.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ........................................

quit sleepin on this shit.............................................. .................................................. .................................