straitjakit vs HOLSTER
 

15 linez max
u spit first

a holster, aint shit wit out gun
0-6 commin at me, what the fuck were ya think-un
and we all know your a coward to
that's why i'm gonna lyrically devower you
i spit fire that'll burn through ya vest, big holes in ya chest
you should of learned from the rest
your rhymes are weak, and your style is whack
my flows come from all directions so watch yo back
cause you ain't shit kid, i'm sick and twisted
the only punches you felt
is when your mom got fisted
thats all i got, peace, i'm out
now its your turn, lets see what your about

like jesus im a preacha...
dont listen n ill leave ya with a bad case of amnesia...

ya moms a ho, got fuked so many times she got a map to her g spot...
you could drink a mug of magma n ya spit still wouldnt-be-hot...

ima fast murderera, here the last word outta ya then leave ya corpse there to decay...
ma rymes are circlin around u like a fukin rap relay...

fuk milk? that must be why u so damn weak...
cuz ya verse reminded me of a elementary kids speech...

most of it didnt make sense, or wasnt worded properly...
unlike me u couldnt get ya gun out ya holster fast enuf to get a shot-at-me...

uppin------------------------------------------------------^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

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Open- holster
Metas - holster
Creavitity - holster
Personals - holster
Flow - holster
Finish - holster
Abuse - holster

vote = holster, strait jackit....e l e v a t e...don't write a line unless it has a punch in it. ex) ur finish - - > not a punch.


My Battles:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92417

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92568

I KNOW BOTH ya'll can come ALOT harder than that...
This was a weak battle, but I gotta vote:

Metas - Holster
Creavitity - Holster
Personals - NONE
Flow - NONE
Finish - NONE

The punches didn't hit, there was nothing that made me say, "Oh shit!"
StraitJakit said:
"Only punches you felt was when your mom gets fisted..."

That was some shit, but not quite enough.
Holster just edged on creativity.
Both ya'll keep it up, elevate and refine those punches so they snap shit.
VOTE: HOLSTER

so this shit was close, both need to elevate, but i'm gonna give it to holster, just cause he gave a lil more, i did like the other guys line about your mom gettin fisted tho. props to ya both....... my vote, holster.
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uppin^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

yo, straight jacket i no thats all uve got u need to hit harder on those punches, holster got this one easy, not long till i vote now so nxt time i'll put a real vote in ite. pz...........................................

can ya guys plz vote n get htis over wit lol its been here long ( i could really use a win on ma record to ) lol im exsited i got ma first vote ever lol :)

Open- holster
Metas - holster
Creavitity - holster
Personals - holster
Flow - holster
Finish - holster
punches: holster
structure: holster
vote: holster

damn a really one sided battle, but gd job holster!

peace

uppin^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^can we get these votes in plzzzzzzzzzz

I'll rip both of you hoes at the same time..haha..anyway..Holster got this..and it is much needed because his battle record sucks ass like a hobby..however..I did like that punch from strait..when he said the only time you felt a punch when yo mom's was fisted..although..he bit that from someone..cause it sounds familar like hell..anyway..Holster gets my vote..and if any of you hoes wanna battle hit me up with a Pm..

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FUCK YOU YA LITTLE FAG I AINT BITE SHIT FROM NO ONE
THAT WAS A PUSSY VERSE I ADMIT BUT I WAS IN A HURRY I HAD OTHER SHIT I WAS DOIN

PEACE