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my life is bent on information while patiently waiting at the train station recieving conversation from a dread lock wearing hation
and iam soaked with prespiration cause the ac vent is adjacent to my placement ..theres a problem then ill erase it
i keep armeries in the basement with nickel plated displacements, encasements your insides vacant in search of a new replacement
a pimp that keeps caucasians and hatians investing savings for my time shares in vegas the shit can get outrageous
its to late to be courageous iam wide spread contagious u cant possibly convey this
wheres your scale you need to weigh this
others try to portray this
to my dismay delay this
iam here only to display this
dont need u to okay this
piru
folks down folk crowns get drowned by the blood of a ghetto renowned carnivorous bloodhound
bloodbound blood found aint nobody adopted
an illegal conglomerate cant nobody stop it

dont sleep on this shit pimpins

I liked the use of vocab. I didnt really understand where the whole thing was going, and if it had a point to it. Maybe i just need to read it through more closley. or maybe there wasnt supposed to be a point.

i keep armeries in the basement with nickel plated displacements, encasements your insides vacant in search of a new replacement

that was my favorite. good use of vocab. keep up the good work

it was ight flow was koo
peep this,very deep and emotional to me:
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=92978
holla