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Dominator -v- Envy Skills
14 Lines MAX
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5votes
no dk no crew no hate all votes must be explained Catagories opening - flow - metas - multis - punches - wordplay - complexity - structure - closing - overall - |
iight yo im checkin in....when are we gonna drop
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Drop at 6 PM EST.................
I wanna eat dinner b4 i start writing 100 char 100 char 100 char |
iight......
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EnVy I’ll have you "fallin breathless" quicker than “fat peeps on treadmills”
Sayin your tha champ, yet you get-killed cuz I shred-Skillz Played lines are making a comeback, mainly cuz this^ faggot emcee Well when i spit, it's 'as-salt'... yet my lyrics are completely 'sugar-free' The esscence of battling, ideal balance of personals-and-punchlines In this battle Envy's takin more "cuts" then "fat-people-in-lunchlines" FreeYayo was your best opponent ..how the hell you claim to be hard? And of your punches just "miss in" the point ..like a wnba guard Out-stompin you is my sole purpose ..and did i mention that i'm gellin? Tha only time you write 'sIC' is when your correctin his spelling I'ma fuckin you up kid, like a police officer at a doughnut buffet Your a fat boy with no life.... your droppin 50.46 posts per day In all reality though, kid, I really gotta admire you on your persistance Too bad im sendin you back where you came from: Non-Existence |
You’re Fake-And-Wack, but I'm endin you're reign “Just In Time”//
When I "Make It Clap", let's see if you can "Bust A Rhyme"// [1] Now ya done walk in to da “Room” wit “Ceilin Clocks” to prove yall “Time Is Up”// New Rap Order must was spittin wit “Testicals” cuz his verse driving me "Nuts”// [2] Damn it I'm Focused-So-Fear, Post-Against-Queers who stand no chance against such a “Potent Carrier”// Don’t “Hope To Be Spared”, cause when i put this "shell to your ear", I guarantee it wont be the "Ocean You Hear”// [3] This Kid wouldn’t do a “Good job” with his “Thumb being glued “Up”// Your flows wouldn't have “Intellect or Weight” if you was “Professor Klump”//(The Nutty Professor) [4] Kids winning streaks always Revert-and-slow cause his VERSES-“FLOW"// with the same consistency of a "pregnant" bitch on "BIRTH-CONTROL"// [5] U don't even “Step Close” there's gotta be “Less Jokes”, I “Wreak Dopes” with “Tecks Folks”// I just won this battle 5-0, cuz Being on “The Weakest Link” is the only place you'd “Get Votes”// [6] My-Craft-Teaches, I’ve-Matched-Jesus...not-trying-to-Brag, But-Please-Kid, EnVy “Off The Chain” like “Snatched Pieces!”// You Cant-Beat-This”, Im’a-Rap-Genus, I Pack-Heat-Shit....with “three life lines” that’s-Half-decent, even “Ask Regis!”// [7] |
and yo dominator... i never claimed to be hard or to be the champ
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uppin for some votes..............
.......need some votes............ com on yo................ dont sleep on this |
shit my bad... on the 2nd bar its supposd to be
Now ya done walk in to da “Room” wit “Ceilin Clocks” to prove yall “Time Is Up”// Dominator must was spittin wit “Testicals” cuz his verse driving me "Nuts”// [2] not new rap order when me and new rap order were gonna battle, i wrote my verse for him the day that we were gonna spit....but he neva spit his..so i didnt use it, so i decided to use it for this, yea i kno its pre-write...but it only took me 20 mins to write it b4 and i didnt edit it, as u can see. This is what its supposed to say: You’re Fake-And-Wack, but I'm endin you're reign “Just In Time”// When I "Make It Clap", let's see if you can "Bust A Rhyme"// [1] Now ya done walk in to da “Room” wit “Ceilin Clocks” to prove yall “Time Is Up”// Dominator must was spittin wit “Testicals” cuz his verse driving me "Nuts”// [2] Damn it I'm Focused-So-Fear, Post-Against-Queers who stand no chance against such a “Potent Carrier”// Don’t “Hope To Be Spared”, cause when i put this "shell to your ear", I guarantee it wont be the "Ocean You Hear”// [3] This Kid wouldn’t do a “Good job” with his “Thumb being glued “Up”// Your flows wouldn't have “Intellect or Weight” if you was “Professor Klump”//(The Nutty Professor) [4] Kids winning streaks always Revert-and-slow cause his VERSES-“FLOW"// with the same consistency of a "pregnant" bitch on "BIRTH-CONTROL"// [5] U don't even “Step Close” there's gotta be “Less Jokes”, I “Wreak Dopes” with “Tecks Folks”// I just won this battle 5-0, cuz Being on “The Weakest Link” is the only place you'd “Get Votes”// [6] My-Craft-Teaches, I’ve-Matched-Jesus...not-trying-to-Brag, But-Please-Kid, EnVy “Off The Chain” like “Snatched Pieces!”// You Cant-Beat-This”, Im’a-Rap-Genus, I Pack-Heat-Shit....with “three life lines” that’s-Half-decent, even “Ask Regis!”// [7] sorry bout that... |
opening - dominator
flow - dominator...envy ya shyt looked a lil streched metas - both multis - both punches - dominator wordplay - envy complexity - dominator structure - dom...again streched..(this shouldnt b a catagory) closing - dom VOTE- DOM.......OVERALL BETTER VERSE ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ drop a vote here n make sure to poll..... http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92259 n vote honestly........1 overall - |
Dominator won this to better punches and a more consistent flow. Envy's lines were stretched a lil.
vote= DOMINATOR Hit this wit an honest vote: Infinite Skillz vs. TAG- http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92779 |
uppin.... ill hit those up when I get home......
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^^^herbish vote infinite skillz
opener(+1)-D closer(+1)-D punches(+2)-D personals(+2)-D wordplay(+1)-Envy multis(+1)-Envy complexity(+1)-D originality(+1)-D cornyness(-2)-Envy enjoyment(+1)-D Overall- Envy Skillz (0).....Dominator (+9)-------Winner....no hate honest opinion..... honest vote here please: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92866 |
follow the outline infinite skillz..........................................
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