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I can't help it I love to live, gotta survive by any means/
My enemies wanna see me die cause they not filln' me/
Is it because of my energy or because I got these tendencies/
That makes a ni99a hot and feel like killn' me/
I know they're not who they pretend to be/
Want to be gangstas fake thugs, I see straight through your make up/
Your whole lives is made up/
Survival of the fittest, I roll with heavy hittas that'll leave you sprayed up/
I'll leave u cold like a popcicle, wanna be bold/
Now the strory's told of how you look in the hospital/
Is it all really necessary for a dude to test my fury/
Then I retaliate and have to leave 'em buried/
How long will it all last/
Will my time soon run our like the sand in an hour glass/
There's one question that I have to ask, how do I choose my path/
Time to make a decision, gotta answer fast//

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good drop, had some decent lines qand flow fell off sometimes but it had a good finisher keep it up man pz

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Hey, can you post up your three replies bud?
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Thanks bud.