EnVy SKiLLZ vs *MoF*
 

Rules

5 bar max

ill set it up...since u called me out u spit first

u got 20 mins to spit and i got anotha 20 after that

5votes
no dk
no crew
no hate

all votes must be explained

Catagories

opening -
flow -
metas -
multis -
punches -
wordplay -
vocab -
complexity -
closing -
my vote -

how come the people who always challenge me neva show up

some one close this

and this is like the 5th time too

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yo peace out....

im in here...check this......

ima post today....

calm down.....perhaps all the people got fear of u......lol
i dunno!

perhaps i would´ve been betta to spit blind.....
but fuck it....i know...u need wins.....

check this.....:

Im goin up on stage surrounded by lyrical n mystical mist n in rage /
wage a war gainst u stand there wit "ballistical" fists and young age //
ure used to go as the snd cuz everytime u stand behind the male / (pokin ass)
a gale´s streamin out my front u try to find me but hit nuttin - fail //
ure shootin wit placebos bitch, u know, words that make no sense /
use ur dense i rock the mic this hard, its eruptin n breakin ya hands //
u get fucked by my slug aint got luck cant duck cuz u get plucked /
cooked by flaming verses gettin half weight crooks like u in hearses, sook //
lucky if ure able to survive the epidemic disease caused by lyrical shots/
MoF rocks not wit gats just polemic, feelin home at worst criminal spots//

iight yo......sorry i didnt relize u posted...

MoF-Ya-Played, Check-Ya-Grade.. "Straight Fs", Cuz youFail To Come "Hard"//
Upset-Ya-Parade, Your Punches are "Weaker" Then "Crashes" Wit "Parked Cars"//
Accustomed To Not "Using-Ya-Feet" Cuz U Have Nothin To "Stand For"//
Confusin-Ya-Speech, "Dieting" On "Rocks" So U Can Have A "Hard-Core"//
Using-Harder-Sayings, Then His Lines Are Gettin Snapped-Like-Twigs//
Using-Proper-Language, *MoF* Still Couldn't Make My I's (Eyes) Go Big//
I'll Call Ya A-Door-Knob Cuz Ya Style Leads Straight Out-Tha-Door//
Givin Credit For Weak Verses Is The Only Time U Step To The Fore//
Like Delivering-Lighting-Bolts EnVy Transmits-Thunderous-Blows//
Then Toss Ya Life Under-The-Remote So U Can Have Shit-Under-Control//

opening -
flow -
metas -
multis - Envy
punches - Envy
wordplay - Envy
vocab - ....
complexity - Envy
closing - Envy
my vote - Envy Skillz
Not a bad battle. Can ya peep these please? http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93603 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92779

Aight it's not lettin me poll my vote. Have a MOD put it in. Peace .................................................. .................................................. .....

Opening- Envy (had a couple of punchlines, MoF lacked punches in his opener)

Flow- Envy (MoF's flow was choppy due to a lot of mispelled words that I couldn't pronounce..and his syllable structure didn't match up in each bar...EnVy's flow was a lot smoother..)

Metas- Envy (Envy had a metaphor in almost every line..MoF had some metaphors but they were weak and not as consistent..)

Multis-Envy (again...envy just had more multis, and they were also bigger, better rhymes..)

Punches-Envy (once again....just like the metaphors, Envy had a punch in almost every line, if not EVERY line...for the most part his punches were pretty straight too...MoF had a severe lack of punchlines)

Wordplay-Envy (the Dieting on rocks line was pretty good, and was the best example of wordplay in his verse I think...although I didn't get the proper language line....MoF really didn't have any wordplay that I could decipher.)

Vocab-Tie (both used some decent vocab....)

Complexity-Envy (definately b/c each of his rhymes were more complex...his punches were though prevoking without being too complex...overall his verse was much more complex)

Closing- Envy (without a shadow of a fuckin doubt....the last line about "shit under control" was NICE....a good closer....MoF just seemed like he ran out of shit to say for his closer)

.::My Vote::. EnVy SKiLLZ

Peace

(btw can u drop an honest vote on Emerge Vs. RapidFire)

it won't let me poll vote either...I think someone fucked up the poll voting system lol.....someone fix that ish..and whoever adds Tag's vote to the polls can u add mine too?

peace

you gotta be registered to vote on the poll...thats why

thanks for the opinons anyway

uppin for some votes from registered people..............

com on....

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Breakdown
punches=envy..jus try not to use.."..."
flow=both
metas=envy
enjoyment=envy
structure=both
personals=envy
creativity=envy
sustainment=envy
overall=envy
pz not a bad battle at all

yo envy ya shit was tight....
i expected that....
that looks quite straightforward fo u......not a prob fo me....

then lets get sum more votes in here...

peace!

thanks for the vote brix.....

uppin.............................

and how do u register to vote......i cant figure it out

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ohh shit my bad............................

i went on my boys name accedentily

sorry............

yo sorry bout that............................

uppin #4.................................

com on people............................................ .......