" Closed Doors "
 

Im locked behind doors in a maze of eternal sadness
gladness over-runned with thoughts of hateful passions
where actions drastic, and bodies get rapped in plastic
Fantastic thoughts caved in by madness
I left my home, to only here of death and plots
Friends shot, sharing last breaths with bullets thoughts
What if there hollow, which brings more sorrow
money not left to borrow, only makes even worse tommorow's
now things worse, I became next on the list
Fist clinched, steps inched, as I couldnt even trust friends
as I came home, death seemed to contain my brain
my hope drained, thoughts driving me insane
I ran with the game, and it seems to rebell
Thoughts of suicide, convencing messages from hell
But I when I listened, I met a road that glistend
the missions got cancled, came back the happieness i was missen
Life now comes easy, money not earned being sleezy
warm days stay, dont get cold and turn breezy
Ive been through hard times, and met with situations
Figured my equation, work over the amaz'n
Will the harder times visit my doors again
or will the stay close, and once again trap me in...


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This is about some real crazy shit that happend in my life, and the thoughts that were on my mind all the way through it if you dont know already. Tell me what you guys think...

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-High Class a.k.a Confusion


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http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...2400#post922400 - Mr. Anderson

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...2400#post922400 - Auspicious

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...2433#post922433 - uraddiction

i liked this one i could relate i know sometimes it is hard to deal with all the crazyness and that you feel so trapped.
i liked this line

Will the harder times visit my doors again
or will the stay close, and once again trap me in...

great drop

Thanks ma great femcee LOL
aight lets try and get some more reply's. And you guys might wanna go check this ladies poem out, its real deep^^^^^^.
REPLIES PLEAZE

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-High Class a.k.a Confusion

i was feelin that on some real personal shyt.... i think an emcee does his best work when he speaks on the real and not them fabricated thug tales that everyone thinks they can get away with in every other song they write.... keep'em comin'

thanks for that reply homie. And wtf is this cat doin, dont do this shit mu-fucka. Aight, not unless there is some point in the matter. keep replys comin please.

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-High Class a.k.a Confusion

UPPIN!!!