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Mary~Jane vs X Ecution
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30 min blind spit check in u kno the rest.....1 |
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Ill leave you hurt then mix gasoline n fire in ur body, watching her burst apart
Cause this bitch could never be straight, like kindergarten student cursive marks Ill intensely defeat weak mc's with unarthodox flow like you so dont come again Battling me is Like anerexic leprechuans sprinters cause your lucks runnin thin I'm not concerned how complex your style is, you'll always be a shady foe But don't battle me cause i'll be sure to rip you like Oprah wearing baby clothes I bust like erections and razor sharp multies that'll cut you open like C-sections killen broads like you that don't get noticed like a vampire mirror Reflection ill treat u like a deck of cards in this battle cause ima ace it put u up close wit words the way i throw them at ya grill so u can Face it |
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sorry i was takin care of some shit bout to spit right now
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You get murdered fast dawg you dont belong in this game
Dead quick fast, eyes turned into the first letter of your name now ya stressed, this battles mine, you made the mistake of accepting in the first place my burst pace hurts gays, now we know why X been in pain since his birthday! Elevate man, you need serious help if you really wanna make noise Cuz the punches you 'throw' are 'weak' like 'crippled paperboys' im equipped like Indiana Jones wit my murder whip ya heard it kid? your words ill flip, and turn to shit well bein superb wit tricks you got mixed up wit parallel, see? X and ill will 'never cross' fuck field goals, cuz throwin you out of the game would be a clever toss |
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Go Mary Jane Go!
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hehe wutup girl!
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that was a good very mj
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Really, really close battle here.
Great shots by both, kudos. Wordplay: X, takes it. He had more of it and I think was wittier and 'more clever' (is that a phrase?) with it. Punches: MJ, gotta say, X's shots weren't as hard as hers. The "b-day" line was tight and funny as fuck. Flow: MJ, ever so slightly takes this...most of her lines were just a hair shorter than his, resulting in a more fluid read. Metas: Tie, I think X had more, but her's were a hair stronger. Too close ta call. Personals: This will decide it, I guess. Neither really threw anything other than name references and plays. So, another tie. Overall: MJ, her tighter structure, shorter lines, and punches take this. Great battle, though. Peace |
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Mary~Jane won this due to better punches and structure. X, ur lines were a lil stretched. Good Battle overall. Props to both of ya.
vote= MARY~JANE Hit this wit an honest vote: Infinite Skillz vs. TAG- http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92779 |
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